In Detective Conan, the Age of Yokai Begins

The subject matter is very novel, but the format of the writing is too small. The protagonist is brainless and a stingy, mean-spirited, buck-and-so-sou. This system is really a waste.

Is the black organization in this book really the one who can defeat the protagonist? Zombies were captured alive and used as experimental samples. Miyano Akemi, who practiced Devil Fruit Ninjutsu, was shot to death by several shots. The Metropolitan Police Department had no choice but to capture the misty man from the black organization when they first encountered it. Currently, all the protagonist's subordinates have suffered a complete defeat against the black organization.

I read Chapter 75 of the novel and found a very illogical question. The protagonist's income relies on gaining emotional value by creating fear, etc., So the protagonist creates shadows and other ghosts to gain income, which is no problem. But the protagonist gives Sato Miwako, Xiaolan and others the power to eliminate demons, which is actually an act of reducing fear and reducing benefits. Facing the weird, being helpless can maximize the benefits of fear. The protagonist's behavior of giving others the ability to eliminate demons can only make the plot more exciting, but it is negative from the perspective of benefits. Unless, like Xiaolan, the protagonist gives her the ability to accept Xiaolan as a witch, then the protagonist's profit point lies in Xiaolan herself and not in the emotional value. What about Sato? Is it possible that she was also accepted as a witch? If you don't collect it, it will be a waste of resources and reduce your own profits. If everyone who has a relationship with the protagonist has obtained transcendence and is accepted by the protagonist, then the protagonist will basically be exposed directly, except for the body and mind.

He is ruthless but not decisive enough, he has no regard for life but lacks madness, he wants to be the mastermind behind the scenes but he makes himself a target in front of the stage - and he is the biggest one! Even if you are the biggest target, the power you show is not enough! You either use your invincible power to make people awe you, or you do nothing and people have no idea - you have invincible strength but pretend to be a weakling, and another weakling knocks you in the door. Even because you pretended to be weak, he didn't beat him to death. All I can say is, nt. The whole thing has not been the same mentality as Kibutsuji Muzan before being tortured by Enichi Tsujikuni. That is, you are the protagonist and your B system has the backbone. As long as you are a villain, I guarantee that you will not survive three chapters in the hands of the protagonist behind the scenes of spiritual energy recovery. Make history! Especially the method of spreading extraordinary things is the best of all. What kind of genius idea is the Sharingan illusion to entrust dreams? What if you have some special abilities related to dreams? And the illusion is of no use. Chun Chun just dreams for the sake of dreaming. When I saw Xiaolan dreaming about Kikyo's life, I was a little excited and thought that some kind of modern Inuyasha plot was going to be staged - eh, is the author going to show us something interesting? The result was a big mess. Platycodon's identity? Previous life. Things from past lives? In spite of. Psychic effect? Pure slaying of demons. InuYasha story scene? Does it count if the protagonist uses Naraku's demonic power to give Xiaoran to Shinzo Abe and then resurrects her? Tmd Naraku has a sense of participation. What kind of different world villain is the Dream Master? The protagonist doesn't have much of a role. Of course, the mastermind behind the scenes doesn't have a role to play. After all, the character is all about side effects - can you make it more awesome? I read the pros and cons everywhere, and I only found the word "shameful" in your book. In the past, I admired the protagonists of the behind-the-scenes mafia style because they were strong and thoughtful. They were willing to work hard to polish themselves or use drugs to increase their wisdom for the sake of details and background stories. Their majesty and strength were also first-rate - it seemed that even if the protagonist was exposed, it didn't matter that they could easily defeat the entire world with their own strength. It was just a turn to the invincible style. "It's just a little bit of wind and frost" - this feeling. The atmosphere created by those authors - at least it has that flavor, right? Why is it that when you come to your place, it becomes like a primary school student's homework assignment, Makabakamikayakamu? Especially your Demon King, who is so embarrassed that I want to detain three rooms and one living room on the ground. That arrogant private laughter... I can only say why the elder of the Soul Palace soared here, why don't you join me in the banner of the Wanli Human Emperor? By the way, there is also the problem of your combat power collapsing. Groove's Demon Slayer Breathing Technique is on the same level as Tailed Beasts. Also, Conan, an ordinary elementary school student in mlgb, uses the Demon Sealing Wave to seal Shukaku with one tail but it consumes a little more weight - you are really more awesome than Kame Sennin's teacher.

After reading the comments, Demon Slayer's lj was also used to brag? I really look down on those authors who boast about the Demon Slayer Breathing Technique. Whenever I see a plot involving Demon Slayer, I just ignore it. It's so disgusting. There's nothing to boast about. What's there to write about in a world that can't even destroy a village with one blow? Just because anime is popular? Except for female characters, I don't care about anything else.

The protagonist has a lusty heart but no courage and is a pure waste. He only gives benefits and does not charge interest. He is a green-haired turtle.

Can I sue the author for fraud? The tag says harem. After reading Chapter 15, there is no sign of a harem at all. Conan even lives in the Mori family. Are you alone in the harem and don't accept Mao Lilan? Or do you want to step on the old trap of Mao Lilan and Conan taking a bath together?

The protagonist is a pure waste, both incompetent and mentally retarded. Xiaolan is written like a holy mother, Conan is written like a retard, and the protagonist is a green turtle man. The author is just pure SM stuff.

No wonder the score is so high, it turns out you can't give a low score

Incompetent and unintelligent, without the mentality of a strong person, a waste will always be a waste, no matter how powerful it is, it will still be a waste. Not even as good as Kibutsuji Muzan, it at least has the advantage of being a cruel and ruthless villain. If you really don't know how to write, then you can specialize a character to the extreme or enlarge your own personality and write it in instead of being as high as you can or as low as you are now!