I Got a Magic Phone
我得到魔幻手机了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Updated
- 16d ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
359Chapters
16.9MReads
22.8kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 48
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How should I put it? It feels like writing an essay, without a sense of immersion.
A native of the motherland who is not afraid of cyber violence, what should he care about? What do you care about? Or what to abide by?
Your setting is very bold. Once it's written, it's pretty good. Can't write well. It has to collapse.
I like silly girl Holland but don't like Hua Mei
There is no sense of immersion at all, no realm division, no idea who is strong and who is weak. Fighting feels like children playing house. For example, the scene where Tathagata fights Patriarch Bodhi. There is no realm, no fighting, just Tathagata coming over. Then Patriarch Bodhi is beaten to death. There is no description of the battle. Then the protagonist just practices martial arts for revenge. There is no sense of satisfaction at all. There is no logic in the writing. I have no idea how far the protagonist has practiced and how different he is from others.
Very good, worth watching. More updates, more worlds to visit.
The quality is very good, but the update speed is a bit slow. It would be best to update it once a day.
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