Anime Crossover: Becoming a God by Stealing Roxy

Is he very malicious to you? It was you who disgusted people first. You wrote a lot of poisonous points and disgusted the readers, so people scolded you. I admit that you want to change it. Yesterday I read the improvement ideas you mentioned, and the result is that there are still poisonous points in it. So what did you change? Changed too many poison points?

After reading the updated chapters, I found that there are really a lot of surprises. Point 1: I always like to mention the sex scenes between supporting characters. The sex scenes between Paul and Senise are repeatedly mentioned in the article. Point 2: Lilia, I don't know if the author will accept it later, but it is written in the article that Rudy often takes advantage of Lilia, which I can't accept.

Author, your comment is just a short essay. It gives me a headache. Just keep it all. If you want to keep it all, you have to cut it off in advance or make some magic changes. It is a poisonous point to only want to change it when you are halfway through.

Lilia refused to accept it for a while and then said to keep it for now and see if it would be accepted or not. You don't have a placement problem. Readers who don't want to waste time, let alone step on the wrong side, have no idea of ​​​​reading it. Why read the book review before reading the book? Isn't it to avoid wasting time and money? Your current situation is one that may or may not be true on both sides. Isn't it a matter of purifying readers?

No, I just don't understand. Do you, Ai Xia, insist on Lilia being reborn? Can't you just let Paul have sex with a random girl? Isn't this all about changing the settings? It has to be second-hand, right? I even thought later that Lilia got pregnant while giving birth to Aisha while playing with Paul? You're more stupid than not accepting it. I haven't even read the book yet and it's already so fucking hard for me to eat just by reading the author's comments. The mistakes are getting bigger and bigger, and you know how to write them.

These writers who write about joblessness don't know how to avoid drugs?

You said that because of the comment section, there are fewer readers. I think there are so many poisonous points in your book. Is it better to just scold you and then leave after being disgusted by you? And don't just talk about others, you won't be ** just because of your own comments, right? If there is a problem with the book, just talk about the problem with the book. You always talk about your own reality in the comments. Why are others so malicious towards you and inconsiderate of you? Let me tell you, no one cares about your real life. If your writing is good, we will care about you a little bit, but if your writing is bad, I will only think that you are doing a bad job. So in your comments, don't write so many useless things. Just write about how to change the poisonous points.

The author is still too new, is this FL? Your ideas for changing the plot can be written on other sites, but here in FL, you are artificially creating rice bowls. FL is most taboo about artificially creating wives, Cao thieves, rice bowls and so on. These s, b The author is still complacent and thinks it is popular. In fact, it is purely NT plot. You still have time to change it. If you want to change it, change it sooner. Don't delay. It will be a disaster. If you don't explode to death on the shelves, your writing skills are considered good, although I don't think you can reach this level.

I don't understand what you are arguing about. Can you please explain to me personally? Didn't the author say that you should change the whole situation to watch or not watch?

But there are some thunders in Wuji fandoms that you have to find ways to avoid. For example, in the original novel, the slightly older characters seem to have had a relationship with Paul, covertly or covertly. Among them, Lilia was the one who couldn't get enough of it. I got into the anime because I knew it was a real harem story and I liked the character of Lilia, but she didn't accept it and became a second mother. And what's even more outrageous is that almost all of the no-job reincarnation fanfics I read were monk novels, and even some harem novels, including Lilia, had to give up the heroine of the three primary colors to Rudy. After reading novels for more than ten years, I have always believed that the point of harem fan fiction is to collect stamps as much as possible while avoiding the pitfalls of the original work, even if it is turned into a vase! Of course, the above are purely personal thoughts.