Checking In to One Piece: The Beginner's Gift Unlocks Flight
打卡一人，新手礼包开出舞空术
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 665k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
288Chapters
5.1MReads
86.8kFlowers
9.9Score
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I feel a little depressed. Why can't I feel happy with the current Shuangwen?
Dasha, he actually handed over his unique skill to the company. I am speechless. It is still a unique skill that can fly. The author didn't use any brain to write it.
1 Is to fall in love with Feng Baobao, 2 is to recruit Xia He to have an affair, and 3 is to forcefully save Chen Duo Feng Baobao has basically no emotions. Xu Xiang doesn't even know what sadness is, so how can he fall in love with you? Xia He, the comic was originally set to be ridden by thousands of people. Later, when it became more popular, it was slightly modified to blur this aspect of the setting. Chen Duo couldn't be taken away without killing Liao Zhong. After killing Liao Zhong, Chen Duo chose to die on his own, and the company couldn't let Chen Duo go. After all, he killed the person in charge.
In my personal impression, the Hundred Step Fist is Feng Shayan's innate ability, an innate ability of the space system, so she can't inherit the spirit-binding general. This is her inner demon.
The writing is very good and sells his unique skills. To be honest, what boxing technique can compare to Wu Kongshu? Just take the low energy consumption as an example
To be honest, it's boring and not fun. Don't watch
After reading Chapter 123, I came to the conclusion that it is better to read the original comic. The plot development is no different from the original work. The main character has not changed anything in the general direction, and has done nothing. It is completely a novel written in the form of a novel. If this is the case, what is the point of spending money to read your fan novel? Don't I just want to see something different from the original work when I pay to read it?
The protagonist feels dispensable and has no sense of existence.
The sea water that Devil Fruit is afraid of is the unique sea rock factor in the sea of One Piece.
Although I haven't read any of them, I might as well read the fanfic.