Anime Crossover: From the Start, I Devour the Lord God's Orb of Light

It's very spicy at the beginning and makes me want to read it. What Fei Lu wants is a refreshing article. If you don't like it, who cares if you don't like it? You lose interest after reading two chapters. The rest of it will probably be frustrating and boring.

The beginning is too boring. Do you understand the value of the three golden chapters?

The author must not write about pirates later. This Oda went against the grain and turned all the pirate heroines into buses. I didn't pay attention but I didn't realize it until now. It's so outrageous. The key is that Oda, the author, set it himself. It's hard to clean up even if you want to.

I don't understand why the author wanted to write about the sewer profession of soul master. Already have a way to die

There should be less style behind the characters in daily comics, and we should also help those incompetent characters to create abilities for them, and it may not necessarily make people think that this is a good match. Even turning inside out is more interesting; in addition, Yukinoshita Yukino has really made me vomit after watching it recently. It's better to directly recruit Naruto, Genshin, Zanchi, Jizuo, Demon Slayer, Pokémon, Fallen Knight, Elf Sword Dancer, Star Dragon Knight, and Xingyue. These come into the daily world and become ordinary people and then slowly practice up. They have all the abilities and talent systems required. In addition, Crystal Palace hopes that it will not be treated as a collection of stamps in the future. It would be better to portray the characters as if they have been relying on new female characters to maintain the work. It is best to create a character roll for the heroine you collected and introduce it to avoid those who have not seen it and do not understand the character and will not be interested in reading it. It is best to have a picture of the heroine in each chapter.

When I saw Chapter 72, I felt that the expressiveness of the attributes in this book was too low. The protagonist's attributes are more than ten times that of ordinary people. When faced with an ordinary wall blocking the road, he actually chose to run and jump on it. With such high attributes, you can kick a hole in the wall. I feel that this book has not written out the strength of the attributes at all, making him just like ordinary people.

The Eight-door Dunjia combined with the Ghost King's physique is the infinite Eight-door Dunjia. The Ghost King's constitution is the kind that uses blue Higan flower to eliminate side effects. The only thing that Demon Slayer World can look at is the physique of a ghost king, a low-end version of blood rebirth.

Damn it, the first three chapters can be deleted. It would be better to just start by devouring the energy of the Lord God's space than now! What is the origin, what is the fantasy, what can be solved in one sentence or a paragraph, the most straightforward, the most exciting, and the most updated can you survive in Feilu!

It's very funny, and the protagonist woman is almost raped, and then the protagonist comes to the rescue. In what age are you still writing this kind of plot? Is there going to be a plot like this in earlier years, where the protagonist is really violated? I also wrote that Komuro Takashi said that the protagonist was too cruel, and then the protagonist stubbornly argued with him for a long time, why are there so many comparisons, he is just a piece of water.

Great. Is it necessary to write the novice copy for so long?