Anime Crossover: I Win Over the Dragon King from the Start, Then Run into Miko

Recently, I have read fewer and fewer movies on Flurry. I finally came up with a comprehensive comic that I can read. I still hope that the author can develop the book. It is not impossible to refer to the original work. As long as you don't just copy the plot without changing the tricks, it may make people feel that this is the same as reading the original work. These suggestions I have are just suggestions and do not mean to overwhelm the show. In the end, it still depends on the author's thoughts. , As long as you don't send girls to get frustrated, it's still acceptable. Since there are readers who are eager to accept girls, they can choose some heroines in anime who are faster to go to bed. Of course, they have to be virgins, such as the heroine in My Girlfriend, who has shaving, etc., And the character of the protagonist is maintained. The above are my personal opinions and suggestions, and I wish the author better and better, and the novel is so satisfying.

Uh, is it Kotori Yurikka's chuunibyou again? I feel a little annoyed.

I really don't know what's so good about these severe chuunibyou. They always cause trouble for others, causing others to be labeled as chuunibyou, and they also set their own settings for others. Mild and moderate chuunibyou are cute, such as the black ones and the heroines in daily supernatural battles, but their chuunibyou will not cause others to cause trouble. Severe chuunibyou really forget it.

The main plot revolves around the Dragon King's work and shogi, and there's really no sense of immersion. I don't know when to write anything else.

I don't have the ability to update, but my ability to delete comments is not small at all.

I hate the character Mizuhara Chizuru

I'd like to give you a suggestion. Maybe I've read a lot of doujins and don't really like the male protagonist Sora Ginko's enemy model. If you like it, just be together. If you don't like it, forget it. You have to see the progress of your relationship. It's impossible to write a lot and just keep it the same as the beginning! It's not like we just met. I used to love the book I Am Not Asashi, the male protagonist?. It's a pity that I didn't write it anymore, but it seems bland and a bit erotic, the male protagonist just follows the development of things and then talks about it. But nothing serious

The author's writing style is good, so think of an interesting outline that is suitable for Feilu readers. It's so hard to write two books, and the results are average. Also, the male protagonists described by the author are a bit like central air conditioners, and this kind of personality has a poor sense of substitution.

If your book is still bland with 120,000 words, then you can only say it is under construction. This 90,000-word book is a bit bland.

The first 50 chapters are quite bland. The content is not exactly the same as the Dragon King's work, but it is also half similar. In addition, the male protagonist has a salty system and is not proactive, so there is really no highlight.