Konoha Exclusion: I Will Take Uchiha on a Great Voyage

I'm a bit confused about this opening. I can clearly stand on my own but insist on joining the Nine Snakes by licking the empress. What do you think? Now that you are so powerful, wouldn't it be nice to just grab a Golden Emperor? When you have the money, you will also have the illusion to control a country's territory. Isn't it better than this start? Even if you want to take after the empress, that's fine. She can't kill a Sky Man, but lick you instead?

It feels like the author's knowledge has suddenly been lowered in recent chapters. To be honest, the problems before were really minor problems that didn't matter, but in the last two chapters The decision to launch the rocket was made haphazardly, and it seemed like there was a big problem. Generally speaking, the first thing to consider when launching a rocket is the weather, and then the wind direction. Then decide which time to start with, Is this book a direct hit? Looking for a festival? ? ? ! ! ! ! I was dumbfounded. Other people's science fiction novels were so open-ended that they didn't have to look at the weather. Your novel has a very small setting, just speed and balance. Do you dare to do this? ? ? , Although there is balance, you can ignore the wind direction and wind force, But not sure about the weather? Clouds, no clouds, rain, fog, are there migrating birds? Don't see any? ? ? ?

If I write about Fairy Tail, I guess there won't be many people left to read it. It's a mess in a single hand of cards.

The system of good reviews, the rewards of good reviews, Kaleidoscope will give you a single magatama, 6, do you think there are too many people reading your book?

You've never seen money, right? Five billion Baileys to kill Whitebeard and you still think you've made a profit? How much does a war cost? If you kill someone else's coach, you will save others no less than 50 billion. You can even add zero. You want 5 billion. Stop being ridiculous.

Why did the Pirates and Navy choose between the two? What's the benefit of being a thief? What good is it if the world government above the navy is also corrupt? So why not start your own organization?

Harem or single heroine? If the male protagonist wants his ex-wife later, let the author say, I'll just run.

There is a problem at the beginning. The only people who can hold meetings at Nanga Shrine are Uchiha ninjas, but there are also civilians in Uchiha. Wouldn't Pigfoot bring civilians with him when he goes to the pirate world?

White horse? Snort! He will never come back! I admit that it was all written poorly by the author of Three Kingdoms Killing. Please give Three Kingdoms Killing a negative review.

Are there only a few hundred Uchiha people? How could Konoha possibly destroy the Uchiha if there were only a few hundred people? It should be about 2,000 people, right?

The three major migrant comics are gathered together, the martial arts version of Pirates, the martial arts version of Naruto, and the fantasy version of Bleach

About "The Knight of Humanity: I, the Ordinary Time Manager" written by Jingluo Canyang Chapter 14: The power of the royal family of time! ! Chapter review.

The patches for ninjutsu and genjutsu are a bit strong. Defeat the animal blood bull in the world of pirates with fireball + water dragon bullet + illusion. Well, it requires a few more steps than a Sharingan genjutsu to defeat a tailed beast, but... It's simply outrageous. I remember genjutsu interferes with the five senses and disrupts chakra. Humans in the pirate world don't have chakra. The Haki in the back is also quite ridiculous. I directly applied the strengthening patch to arrange the full level of control... Oh my god, the patch of Breathing + Chakra is so outrageous, it directly boosts the Haki to close to the full level. It's like the huge physical difference between Senju Hashirama and ordinary people was directly eaten...

In the Fairy Tail world, should I buy Erza's mother into the harem? Irene is very good, she has a good figure and is still a mother. . . .

The author's writing is good, I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on, author, write hard.

Why eat fruit? Give it to those with poor talents, not to geniuses. The upper limit is so high. Naruto characters have many ways to store water. They have developed a weakness for no reason.

There is also Im behind the world government of One Piece. Well, why is the Five Old Stars the biggest?

There is no problem in writing about the Fairy Tail world, but if your protagonist goes to Fairy Tail alone, it will not help the development of the family, and most of the system tasks are related to the development of the family. You, who recruit female characters from different worlds, do not need the help of the family, so it is better not to write the system in the first place or to write other systems.

Only ninjas can participate in the meeting inside Nanga Shrine. When you left, you only care about ninjas and ignore Uchiha civilians?

After looking at it, I found a security company in One Piece World. I took on the task of the World Government to deal with Whitebeard. After a while, I took over the task of Whitebeard to fight the three generals. He is a bit of a villain who jumps repeatedly.

I have to complain, the entire Uchiha family has 300 talents? Leading Uchiha through the world of pirates and teleporting to the land of girls, winning a bet with the empress without robbing, and then starting to be a prostitute? You actually went to pawn the three Uchiha kaleidoscopes, and then took the empress to Sky Island to get gold for half of the empress? The family has just escaped with no hair, no food, no water, no money. You actually want to give half of the gold to the empress. Is this normal thinking? Normally, the three kaleidoscopes shouldn't be directly used to either cheat or exterminate the clan. Isn't the world of One Piece all about robbery?

Civilians are the majority, and ninjas are only a minority. When such a meeting is held, those old, weak, women and children are also there? Are you kidding me? Not to mention those old, weak, women and children, those children from the genin capital cannot be here! Is there something wrong with this novel? Putting poison in the first three chapters? Counting civilians, there are at least a thousand Uchiha people. Uchiha civilians are also part of Uchiha. Most of those Uchiha ninjas are the children of Uchiha civilian families. Do you think everyone is the child of the clan leader and elders?

Is this name made up? If I remember correctly, the three sisters of the Empress all have names. They are not called flowers, right?

You can only use the Yan Demon Sword for Dimensional Slash, right? Because of the principle that the Yama Sword can cut space, it doesn't matter if you can still use Dimension Slash with an ordinary knife. If you want to teach others how to use it, others won't be able to use it.

Who are Hime Purple and Bai Yizhu? Let's not give random names, okay?

From then on, the protagonist leads a life of drought and water. On the road to all genders!

In ancient times, there was a person who achieved the status of Emperor Fengdu. This author must be a scumbag!

Another mindless person

It's not on the shelves in the past, and there is no golden finger. The author opened the whole Feilu head. It's awesome. I've subscribed to it all. It's good to watch. Come on and update it. As long as you continue with this quality, subscribe to it all.

After reading a few chapters, my feeling is that the protagonist's character has flaws that make it difficult to understand, the protagonist's ability is unclear, the protagonist's behavior conflicts with the protagonist's character, the protagonist's ability conflicts with the protagonist's thoughts, the protagonist's worldview is parallel to the author's worldview, and the worldview in the article is a bit narrow and low-level. Control includes reading and changing. This is like fortune-telling. The ordinary level relies on guessing, the advanced level relies on intimidation, and the top level relies on ability. The protagonist has the ability but does not use it. Pick it up first and then put it down, not put it down first and then pick it up