Comparing the Two Fairies, This Natsu Is Really Slaying a Dragon!

Give the protagonist such a strong ability, and then crazily suppress the protagonist's strength. The kaleidoscope can be opened but it cannot be opened. The kaleidoscope is incomplete if you insist on talking about it. If you want to open a kaleidoscope like Indra, your life is thinner than paper and your heart is higher than the sky. It seems that because of Indra is just like an ordinary member of the Uchiha clan. Please understand that Indra is the eldest son of the Six Paths and the grandson of Kaguya Otsutsuki. What is your protagonist's identity and how many generations of descendants does he have? Indra has the blood of the Otsutsuki clan. Does your protagonist have it? It's really funny. If you want to pressure the protagonist into not opening the kaleidoscope so quickly, just say so. You have to talk about so many incomplete and incomplete things. It's funny.

The author follows your steps. Ignore those cp groups. Feilu's novels are just for fans, and everyone just wants to read them for fun. Besides, the Black Natsu in them is a parallel world, and it has nothing to do with the original world. Nothing Black Natsu does will affect the original world. Don't stop writing or change the original plot just because of a bunch of individual comments. The main thing we bring in from our current perspective is Black Natsu. So Heinas is the core, don't be led astray by those weird CP groups. If you want to read CP, why not read the original work? It's weird to talk nonsense about CP group in novels.

Why is it necessary to separate the protagonist's brother and Mavis? There are so many girls in Fairy Tail! I'm going to fuck my sister-in-law! In the end, even the Magic King couldn't be born... Well, the Magic King really moved me. It's not an exaggeration to say that it is the most touching scene in Fairy Tail, not to mention that Natsu in the Black World is a native! He is not a time traveler, but Zeref is also his biological brother. The author does this, and to be honest, I don't want to read further.

Dragon-slaying magic was originally learned four hundred years ago. In this case, Black Natsu can change some plots. For example, Black Natsu saved Irene four hundred years ago, so Irene was not with the king, nor was she stripped, naked, or publicly executed. Because of Black Natsu, none of these happened. Then Irene became a follower of Black Natsu. Four hundred years later, Black Natsu When she grows up, Irene joins the harem, and Erza is simple. Erza can be a life form created by Irene using magic, just like Zeref creates demons. Irene uses magic and Black Natsu's genes plus Irene's own genes to create Erza. This has nothing to do with Black Natsu. Erza can also join Black Natsu's harem. As for Anna, Lei, and Lucy, it depends on how to deal with it.

Mavis and that dark wizard are the most erotic couple in the original Fairy Tail. Items that have no male and female tendencies are just made into one piece There was also a child that the Sorcerer King arranged to have as a child for two people appeared out of nowhere. This old man was really guilty of having such a naughty Hiro Mashima.

There is something wrong with this author's brain. He wrote a new book even though he wrote well, but the new book is not as good as this one.

With a male protagonist, I always feel that he shares the same character and doesn't have many roles. .

The original version of dragon-slaying magic felt more like it was incomplete or had problems. It was forcibly practiced by the black dragon, which then led to mental or soul problems. He was very good at the beginning.

The realm and strength are very vague. I only know that the protagonist has ten thousand swords to return to the clan and a bunch of swordsmanship. It feels like there is no realm. Ximen Chuixue's swordsmanship is even higher than Ximen Chuixue at full level, but not as powerful as Ximen Chuixue. I don't understand what you mean by this. Just imagine and describe it in words. Without words, the protagonist is just a person who is not innate but can leapfrog and kill innates. I can't tell how powerful he is, and he is constantly suppressing the protagonist's growth.

In terms of comparison, I feel that this book is one of the better ones, or it is more in line with my taste. At least it can distinguish the priorities, and the writing style is also good. There are many others that are indifferent to the priorities. Good guy, the original text is more than the changed one. I think it is better to read the original work.

I think the contrast between the black and white world is mainly about Heinas, right? The white one should be passed as quickly as possible, and the edges of the eyes should be less. Don't have frequent conversations, it's boring.

You don't need to write so much about the original work, you can probably just take it with you

The original story about Princess Natsu holding Erza under the moon was not mentioned in detail. It was a pity that everyone was making fun of her.

Everything is a problem of the amount of updates. The latest chapters are all Naz Bai's videos. I look forward to the latest chapters every day. When I see the videos of Naz Bai, I feel so bad. I feel sluggish. But then I think about it. It's a problem of the amount of updates. If the amount of updates is the same as before, three chapters a day, four chapters a day, that way, I would have reached Naz Naz's video a long time ago, and it won't look sluggish. The author's current amount of updates makes me panic. . .

I think if you want to go 400 years later, you can take Irene and Anna to go 400 years later. If you don't go, you can live with Irene until 400 years later. Because the protagonist can now hunt dragons and then he can become a dragon and have the lifespan of a dragon. It can be written that the protagonist has a way to change between humans and dragons, and the protagonist can solve the side effects of becoming a dragon. It would be nice if he could become a dragon and have the lifespan of a dragon.

The world of Doraemon is very dangerous. It is a science fiction anime with a funny look and a proper world view of the multiverse. If the protagonist goes there, will he really not be beaten?

Can you combine several chapters into one? It's ridiculous that there are not three or four pages in each chapter. It's so short and watery.

How is the total strength calculated? The first level, the second level, and the third level together are still three sections.

In fact, I have always wanted to ask those of you who write about Captains of Great Powers. You write about the main character's plane crashing every day. Over time, do airlines still dare to take passengers? This is a flight of death.

30,000 Novice villages, each with 56,000 people? Are there so few people?

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