Sparkling Fruit in Fairy Tail

It would be awkward to have Ye Xin when writing Japanese comics

Can the author play the heroine Wendy? Can you please reply? I hate authors who don't reply to comments.

If traveling through the world doesn't change the plot, then why do we need a protagonist? If we re-live the plot according to the original work, what's the point of this book? There are a few people who read the fanfic who don't know the plot of the original work, so why bother to spend money to read it?

Now that I'm reading the content of the novel, it's not as interesting as the book review.

Although it's a bit unfinished, I don't blame you. After all, Mashima Hiro himself is also unfinished. Like the original work, your film also started from the Great Demon Fight and ended in unfinished form, but you just followed the rhythm of the original work. This is Mashima Hiro's fault, but I will praise you just because you wrote the ending. After all, you are one of the few Fairy Tail fanfics that does not have eunuchs.

The Shining Fruit is not very good in Fairy Tail. For example, the Fire Dragon Magic can eat fire, and the Steel Dragon can eat Gang. If there is a Light Dragon, wouldn't the protagonist be eaten?

Will the protagonist of the light dragon be eaten?

It was written according to the plot, without any innovation. It just changed the things that Nac did in the original work to the male protagonist. It would be better to watch the original manga and animation.

This book makes readers think they are fools

I've never seen anyone so awesome

Damn it, Yitian Tianshui stopped talking about it, and forced the plot. How many books did you write before about how powerful the protagonist is? The original characters are all trash.

Whoever is reading fan fiction in the name of Fei Lu is a fool. Hou Liangping was shot at the beginning, but it turned out that this opening happened a few hundred pictures later; Zhong Weiguo was shot at the beginning, but this shooting was unsuccessful time and time again. Either Zhong Xiaoai dedicated himself to robbing the execution ground, or Zhong Weiguo repented before his death.

I asked if this inventory video could be on a different timeline?

In fact, it's okay, but the protagonist is raised too high, and Cao Cao's other counselors are lowered too low. It feels like Cao Cao would be dead without the protagonist.

It's becoming more and more perfunctory The author writes this book more and more perfunctorily. First of all, the chapters are getting shorter and shorter. Can one chapter now have a thousand words? It is ridiculously short, probably only six or seven hundred words. The three chapters now are probably not as much as the previous one. Secondly, who is the protagonist now? The whole story is about how Silly Zhu Qin Huairu and the Jia family are acting like monsters. The protagonist never appears in several pictures. Even if he appears occasionally, he is just a bystander, discussing other family affairs with his wife at home without any pain, and then nothing happens. Is this still the protagonist? A character who is transcendent to the courtyard is set up just to serve as a background. Is this still the protagonist? !

How does the author feel about the arrival of the mythical beast River Crab?

It's quite interesting, but I don't like Fan Shengmei. I hope I won't accept him.

I didn't marry Beria at all, huh╭(╯^╰)╮

In subject two, you don't need to control the buttons, and the instructor won't teach them because they are included in subject one. Only teaches gear position, steering wheel, mirror adjustment, and turn signal

Why is it becoming less and less scary? The higher the star rating, the scarier it is, right?

You all understand, you know what I want to see. If there is no resurrected person, I won't watch it.

It's very well written, why don't you come back and update it?

There is no good connection between the previous chapter and the next one, and it feels a bit confusing. Every time, the previous chapter narrates the events well, but the next chapter does not narrate the events of this chapter, which is very uncomfortable.

There is obviously something wrong with your setting. Traveling to a parallel world and still broadcasting in the original world will cause a series of problems, not to mention keywords such as corpses and plane crashes appearing in the live broadcast. Are you stupid as a viewer or stupid as a reader?

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Why is it so ink stained?

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It is suggested to the author that instead of pursuing the savior route of mankind, it is better to build an empire spanning multiple knight worlds, where weirdos, knights, and humans coexist and obey the orders of the male protagonist. Some of the female protagonists and their subordinates are not human. When the crisis of weirdos and racial extremists is resolved, they cannot defeat the male protagonist, but they can guide public opinion, bind all mankind, and suppress the male protagonist with their righteousness. So it is better for the male protagonist to form an organization for the coexistence of all races and slowly develop it into an empire. As long as he is loyal to himself, it doesn't matter whether he is a weirdo, a monster, or a human being, he will be treated equally. If the male protagonist takes in the weirdo girl, he will be very responsible and upright as a human being. Others will not respect the weirdo female protagonists, so it is most appropriate for them to coexist and obey the male protagonist.

The earliest comment was on October 19, 2018. Did it take more than two years to write?

The protagonist is not the sixth one, he has no moral bottom line, he is a scum, okay?