Villain: After I Give Up, the Heroines Panic!

Honestly, aside from the ridiculous plot point of not having one's true feelings heard, everything else is inferior to that novel, "The Villainous Holy Son."

It's better than that villainous saintly son book; at least it doesn't have that ridiculous plot where the protagonist's inner thoughts are read.

This is so weak, and I get annoyed just seeing the words "bitter smile." Once or twice is fine, but why do you keep doing it? Are you sick or what?

Can you please stop torturing your junior sister?

This is so lame, so frustrating! A quasi-emperor couldn't kill several supreme beings, and then had to let them escape. Why bother with these frustrating plot points?

This is utterly mindless and idiotic! In a fantasy world, a top-tier genius is actually outmatched by a pretty but useless follower who relies on cunning to sacrifice his potential to become a top genius. I'm speechless.

I have a question for the author: The original protagonist, Lin Yun, is like an idiot, and the original villain, who always gets thwarted by him, what kind of intelligence does he have? Did he stop developing after weaning?

I'm a little curious, does "sit up and do it yourself" count as slacking off?

The female follower character is less developed than in the villainous Saint Son story. Ling approaches him with ulterior motives, uses petty tricks, and speaks in a coquettish manner, which I personally don't like.

You can't even copy properly! What kind of writing is this? You practically copied the settings, names, and plot of someone else's novel, and you still can't write anything coherent.