Stealing the Flame-Flame Fruit, the Dragon-Slaying Secret Art of God Valley

There is too much nonsense. The short period of time after defeating the Golden Lion and talking to Rocks has made you water several chapters. Why don't you read what you have written? Rocks stretched out his jade-like fingers? You are writing about pirates, brother! Isn't this an adjective describing a woman?

The turrets on the warship are gradually melting, and the weapons in their hands are all red. The navy above is actually okay? Just hot to the touch? What a great batch!

Let's not talk about how your fruit ability is determined. Every time you read a fan novel using multiple abilities, other people will guess the double fruit. The world view is that everyone thinks it is impossible to eat two. How do you think of the double fruit for the first time, and there are so many fruits with multiple abilities. Every time I see fan fiction doing this kind of plot, it is like primitive people who think it is a miracle when they see a light bulb, unless there is no such thing. Otherwise, we would not have made outrageous guesses if we had the knowledge of the current era, and a bunch of races, swordsmanship, and moves can all use special abilities. It is impossible to think of an answer that is denied by the world at the first time. This has nothing to do with whether the answer is right or wrong, but that no one would think like this under normal development. Moreover, every time this kind of link is carried out, the top brass of the Navy will definitely confirm that it is a double fruit without thinking and discussing. How many words are there to discuss it? All I can say is come on, Pirates have a lot of common sense mistakes like this, I hope they can think clearly when thinking about the plot, come on

The thunder and lightning in Thunder Flame Dragon mode was actually obtained from Enelu. Is the author crazy? There are no Eniro cells at this time, right?

Even if you blow the Shuangshaoshuo fruit into the sky, it will not be able to compete with the Rock Berry fruit. The world is limited to this, is it necessary to blow it like this? If the protagonist has a system, the potential of the fruit can be increased. The protagonist is an ordinary time traveler without a system and without the blessing of external forces. Breaking the rules of the world is more difficult than climbing into the sun.

There are about two thousand words in one chapter, and almost a thousand or several hundred words are various descriptive sentences or various personal emotions and psychological activities of the protagonist. The real plot content only accounts for one-tenth or two-tenths. You are really stupid.

You can stand up to the King of Gods in the Valley of Gods, why don't you just fight the Yonko Kaido casually?

Please collect the inner activities of the characters. There is too much nonsense. No matter how good the subject matter is, it will drive people crazy. At least two-thirds of the 1,000 words are useless inner activities. It is really annoying to read.

And you did some magic

A lieutenant general is beaten by you and has a domineering look??!