Genshin Impact: Raising a Sword Immortal Until Ganyu Spoils Me Rotten
原神：剑仙养成，要被甘雨宠坏了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 39k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Gaming
- Subgenre
- Virtual MMORPG
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
19Chapters
1.2MReads
2kFlowers
8.5Score
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It made me feel depressed. You don't have to write the part between Ningguang and the protagonist in such a calculating way. Besides, the emperor watched the protagonist grow up. No matter how the relationship between Ningguang and the protagonist can be said to be strangers, Gan Yu who was brought up by the emperor and Gan Yuliuyun who was brought up by the wind can be said to be a family in any way, and they are just like a family. The strength of the protagonist and the character of the swordsman really don't need to be afraid of threats and troubles. Your contract and the emperor's acquiescence made the emperor's ideas later seem very inconsistent. It always gave me the feeling that the emperor did not believe in the protagonist who could be said to have grown up. He felt that he was not human inside and out. But other than this, the plot is very good. The above are all personal opinions. I just feel that the relationship between the characters is not well managed.
I think the author really has a problem with this. The protagonist has only been in Liyue for a long time and Ningguang has Zhongli's contract. I'm speechless. Even the Immortal may not be able to find Zhongli, you, Ningguang, who got the contract for her face. Do you know how to use your brain when writing? And the protagonist is written like someone who can be bullied by everyone. Ning Guang dares to plot against the protagonist and Shen He. Why don't you write about the condensing light calculating god when you write like this? After talking about why this protagonist must serve Ningguang Keqing and the others. You write it as if the protagonist can't live without them.
The protagonist who was adopted during the Demon God War didn't even know that the protagonist's life had been in vain for so many years because of Ningguang's plot? Moreover, you have a feeling of Zhongli's distrust in everything you write. You have been with Zhongli for so many years and now you still want to write about the protagonist being forced to sign a contract with Ningguang. Wouldn't Zhongli ask the protagonist to sign a contract to protect Liyue after all these years?
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