Bounty Hunter: From the Start, I Was Ordered to Assassinate Senju Tobirama

I feel that the protagonist's all the shadow-level strength is too watery. It seems that no matter who fights with the protagonist, it's a 50-50 split. Are you Kakashi? Your film-level strength is so **

As the title says, this Uzumaki Ningzi must not be the heroine! If it were an original heroine, that would be quite disgusting. After all, fans are just fans, so why add a heroine who doesn't exist in the original work? Especially the protagonist is a time traveler. As a time traveler, if you open a harem, of course you have to do your best to capture the beautiful characters that appear in the original work. Otherwise, why are you still traveling? Isn't it good to write that the protagonist is an Aboriginal? Also, the protagonist didn't get the Flying Thunder God. Is this because the author deliberately suppressed the protagonist? After all, it was previously written how perverted the protagonist is if he gets the Flying Thunder God. He can completely threaten everyone. After all, he can fly the Thunder God if he can't defeat him.

Author, you want the protagonist to kill Tsunade in the next episode

In the next plot, the protagonist will be sealed for decades, and then Naruto will be born, and then a new plot will start. Author, if you write it like this, there is no need to read it. I just want to see the protagonist continue to kill these Kage-level buddies who are surrounding him, and then continue to pursue becoming stronger. If you want to write the novel into Bankai, it's okay, but don't skip the timeline with any seals or the like!

It's just a mere shadow, but I still want to pick up two super shadows, especially the three-generation four-person group, they are really useless!

There are so many lessons learned, I am really not afraid of death. You look at the comments section and there are many people talking about it. In fact, if you look at the backend data ratio, most of them don't look at the comment section. As long as you write well, your data will tell you what is true.

1. Don't write emotional lines later like keeping a running account. Especially the routine of killing yourself when you flirt with Tsunade, especially the routine of a hero saving a beauty to save Hinata is terrible, so don't even need an emotional line! 2. Don't kill too many main plot characters, otherwise you will be exhausted from completing the plot. 3. Don't play conspiracy theories to instigate rebellion against the main characters. You are not the owner of the Escape, unless you can spend a lot of articles to get it back, which is the most useless and readers will not pay for it. What's more, you've traveled through time, why do you care about other people? Don't make it so boring and pointless that everyone has to be locked up, and the plot is difficult to complete and awkward.

First of all, Tsunade is one of the heroines of this book, but the main purpose of these chapters is the Sharingan, and writing about Tsunade is just incidental!!! And if we don't develop feelings for Tsunade here, we will have to write more about how to deal with Tsunade and Suan's relationship in the future, so we can just seal the relationship between the two here.

The biggest failure was killing Senju Tobirama so how to win over Tsunade

The pillar room is green, I want to see Mito