In Konoha, This Sasuke Is a Quincy

Naruto's situation is tragic because her true identity was hidden by the Third Hokage. On the surface, she was just an ordinary orphan. But Sasuke is different! They are definitely members of the Uchiha clan. Even though his entire clan had just been wiped out, he was still the sole survivor, and everyone knew that.

I came to FL to read action-packed stories, but I think you've suppressed the Quincy's founder's power far too much. I think you should just let the protagonist learn abilities from Naruto.

There's something wrong with this writing. This is clearly a template for Ishida Uryu: a weakling in the early game, but with Holy Script Awakening, he's overpowered. Yhwach only needs to use Soul Shard and absorb others to easily defeat the Kage within a few months.

This is hardly the power of the Quincy's progenitor! It's far too weak. Even as an infant, he could separate his abilities to strengthen his subordinates. You should probably change it to the power of Uryu Ishida.

This protagonist is so useless; the Yhwach template only has this much ability.

As someone who doesn't know who the progenitor is, I'm completely baffled. I can't understand this template either. There's no progress, and the abilities are minimal. At least show the template's progress and abilities on a panel. I'm just curious, how does this template gain power? You don't write down the progress, you don't write down the abilities, you don't tell the reader anything. What are you writing? Just say a Quincy progenitor. Are you only trying to attract Bleach fans?

Are there any novels about Habach? Which one?

The protagonist isn't just plain stupid; he's probably got some serious illness. Revealing his strength to Sakura and Kakashi, and that's it? Then Sakura tells the whole class she gave her soul to Sasuke—it's ridiculous! He exposes everything. Other protagonists hide themselves, playing the role of a mediocre, unambitious character.

How idiotic would it be to reveal your strength to Kakashi just for a Chidori? You'd be better off practicing Yhwach's abilities. Compared to Yhwach's abilities, 99% of those ninjutsu are weak, and even if they're useful, they'll only be used briefly later on.

It seems like you don't need to train... You just need to give your blessings to others, and once they've had their fun, or you don't want to give anymore, you can get your money back with interest and become stronger.