
One Piece: A Retired Veteran Awakens the Genryusai Template
航海,退役老兵,觉醒元柳斋模板
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.5M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
928Chapters
14MReads
225.5kFlowers
10.0Score
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To be honest, I don't quite agree with the author's Mr. Yamamoto template. Judging from the expressiveness of the original Bleach, 50% of Mr. Yamamoto is enough to dominate the world of One Piece. And does the author need to be so good? I don't understand who, except Im, whose combat power is unknown, can take on the protagonist's sword. Why bother with something that an Avenger can solve with one sword?
It's even uglier than a primary school student's composition. It's all nonsense. I kept reading it and stopped reading after dozens of chapters. I originally wanted to delete it, but I thought about posting it in the book review section to prevent book friends from being offended.
Doesn't this make Im a woman and pull her under her and hit the supermarket hard?
If the captain has 60% strength, if Yimu can only destroy a kingdom with one blow, then even the captain's defense cannot be broken. The author's writing is too weak.
Don't always avoid killing characters in the original novel. Many protagonists obviously have the power to crush them, but they always fail to kill them. This is a common problem in many similar novels. For example, Akainu, who received a serious punch from Saitama's template protagonist, jumped out of the game in less than twenty chapters. The general in the world of One Piece has a god-level passive. That is, no matter how much stronger the opponent is than you, they are still within the level of a general. It's the same regardless of the Six Paths level, One-Punch Man, or even the Ultimate Digimon (the special move of the complete Mechanical Greymon, where every missile fired is a small missile). In a large number of fan fiction, the vitality of these generals is more powerful than Luffy's sit-ups. For example, the combat effectiveness of these admirals is equivalent to that of a colonel, while the protagonist is an admiral. But the protagonist just can't defeat these generals. It seems that without these characters, the author doesn't know how to write. The author completely left the characters who should have been killed alive for the sake of the plot.
You have lived for a long time and have no descendants. You have lived in vain, right? I feel like you are not good at that??? What's the point? What is the meaning of your life? The most useless time traveler in history?? To put it bluntly, you are not good at that. Otherwise, how could you write like this??? Hahahahaha
60% Of Yamamoto Genryusai's strength is completely invincible among pirates, and it is the kind that all the emperor-level combat powers combined cannot beat.
A Shinigami who has been practicing for ** years cannot defeat a Devil Fruit user who has been practicing for decades?
If you don't hand over the Sky Gold, the government will move you out of the franchised country, and your country will no longer be protected by the government. There are hundreds of countries in the pirate world, and only those few franchised countries will be destroyed. If you don't hand over, you will be destroyed. There will be few countries in the world.
In my eyes, 20% is invincible! Is there any spiritual pressure? It's all wiped out.