Dad, My Movie Won an Award. Did You Pass Your Makeup Exam?

1. Too slow! 2. Keep slapping me in the face! 3. I have been criticizing this and that. The main plot is too general and the details are too few. According to the author's writing, not many people will read it after about 200,000 words!

The pacing of the first three chapters is okay, reflecting the bad relationship between father and son, and the plot begins to unfold. Although the mother was mentioned in one sentence and then disappeared, I still spent a lot of time describing the love between mother and child. Except for the people in the protagonist's live broadcast room who understand, everyone else can only follow and scold, and preparations have been started from the beginning, and the first villain is introduced in the ten chapters of the construction scene. In the next ten chapters, the conflict with the villain intensifies, the relationship between father and son intensifies, and the protagonist fights back. In the next ten chapters, the villain launches an attack to block the plot, the father forces an apology, the relatives reach out to make profits, the protagonist completes the scene design, the music is completed, and the selection of personnel begins. Blocking no one to use, foreshadowing the goddess classmate, darkly targeting the fiancée, and picking up gold from the sidekick. That's it for now. If you know it, you want to promote but first suppress it. If you don't know, you think it's just to suppress the protagonist. The main line advances slowly, and the cool points perform poorly. To be determined

At this pace, can you finish writing your first movie with 200,000?

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It's so funny that in order to highlight the protagonist's filial piety, he was scolded forcibly, but you're right, the plot of ruozhi can only be written by you. I only have three words for the author: filial piety, virtue, and joy. I was looking forward to this book, but now it's no longer necessary and I've deleted it.

Is the movie still going to be shot? Judging from the way this is written, it may not be possible to make a movie after it is put on the shelves.

You don't need to ask if anyone has read it, most of them have not said anything after reading it, and when they come in and see that there are so few chapters, even those who are interested will pick it up first, and most of them will comment on it if they ask after thirty or forty chapters.

If you don't slap me in the face, you'll run away!!!

Can you go slower?

Give me a monthly pass, update it