Hong Kong Films: The Predator, Starting by Taking Over a Street

I hope it's better than that one. That one, with only one female lead, wasn't very good; it didn't even include any of the many beautiful women in Hong Kong films.

Of all the Hong Kong-style writers I've read, you're the most frustrating. You could easily take everyone down and become the boss, but you prefer to play the coward. I just don't understand.

It's a perfect copy, nothing special, 250 each.

The sentences don't flow smoothly, it's too tiring to read, and it feels strangely familiar!

Even if you have a system, it's useless. Don't bother writing anything, go back to screwing in screws. You're truly useless.

Many of them are just watermarks, there's nowhere to complain.

It's written in a disjointed, fragmented style; it's too tiring to read, I can't stand it.

You can't even write basic coherence, what kind of novel are you trying to write? One sentence you're chatting with your younger brother, the next you're just spouting nonsense. Garbage.

Review of Chapter 044, "Legend of the Jianghu" (4th update, please give flowers and ratings) of "Hong Kong Film: Predator, Starting from Taking Down a Street" by Duorou Yangmei.

Regarding Chapter 017 of "Hong Kong Film: Predator, Starting from Taking Down a Street" by Duorou Yangmei: Double Flower Red Stick in the Trial of Duty, Collecting Debts in Ark Lane (2 Updates, Seeking Flowers and Reviews)