Immortal Cultivation: This Old Fox Is Way Too Cautious

Now I'm completely cross-dressing and slapped in the face. I have nothing to do with Gou, and there's that Bai Shirou who forced me to add talents. It's so ridiculous to suddenly appear and have a higher level of cultivation than the protagonist. I don't know why the author insists on getting together with the protagonist. Obviously the protagonist has an infinite lifespan and relies on cultivating immortality. If you still have sex with women, you will leave yourself weak points, and your personality will completely collapse.

I have seen too many examples of authors being soft-hearted and listening to some readers change their outlines, but the results are not very good. If the author has any ideas and ideas, just write them. If you don't want to read them, just leave. Don't shit in the comment area** people. If you really want to write according to your ideas, you can reward the author with tens of thousands of dollars and slap him in the face so that he can change it. Do you think he will change it?

When I saw that the main character looked ordinary and ordinary, I immediately lost interest. I am very handsome myself, but the main character looked so ordinary that it was hard for me to get involved. I stopped watching.

To say that love is cut off is nothing but cowardice and fear.

When I saw 202, I couldn't read anymore. I tried my best to sort out the plot about Bai Zhirou without any personal emotions, that is, the possible emotional lines. When they met for the first time, the male protagonist pleased her to start her extraordinary journey, sneaked into the medicine garden, and started digging for golden fingers. Bai Zhirou was arranged to get married. The male protagonist thought it had nothing to do with me and killed one of her engagement partners. The elder whose son was killed by the male protagonist begins to take power. Bai Zhirou and her father's situation are getting worse and worse. The male protagonist thinks that it has nothing to do with me. Bai Zhirou's father passed away. She relied on the male protagonist, cared about him, and gave him things she thought were useful. However, the male protagonist still thought it had nothing to do with me. Bai Zhirou succeeded in practicing and decided to take revenge, but failed. The male protagonist turned into a villain and rescued her. Bai Zhirou confessed to the male protagonist, but was rejected. The male protagonist became an immortal and found that he couldn't let go. He came back to find Bai Zhirou and found that she had been accepted as a disciple by a powerful man. She was recognized by Master Bai Zhirou, but was prevented from meeting her because of her strength. She was determined to succeed in cultivation and practiced double cultivation with Bai Zhirou to help her break through the situation.

Use broken legs to verify your ability to recover, and use thousand-year poison to verify whether you are invulnerable to all poisons. Could it be that the protagonist has a serious brain disease? You know you're the protagonist and you can't die, right?

This heroine named Bai is the biggest failure. If you want to write a story without a heroine, why would you portray her so easily?

I've read the first hundred chapters, and the author's writing style is okay, but I don't understand what Bai Zhirou's setting is. You said you wouldn't use her to threaten the protagonist, but you let her meet the leader of a powerful force and become a genius cultivator. This is more bloody than using her to threaten the protagonist. In my opinion, letting her live alone for the rest of her life is the most perfect. You have turned it into a portrayal of waste material again, or the protagonist goes back to save the threatened Bai Zhirou, which is still acceptable. The main reason is that you wrote that two people are not from the same world, and then you wrote that again, which made me have no interest in pursuing it. This is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't criticize me. Thank you.

People cultivate immortality for the sake of immortality. Why do you cultivate immortality after you have become immortal? To show off? How ridiculous. I don't even dare to accept a love that doesn't disdain your mediocrity and inaction. Why bother to cultivate that immortal? Ha ha. What is the difference between you and the Living Buddha Jigong? For the sake of that Buddha, you can marry that housewife.

Whether it is Pao Dao or Lao Liu, they all use small things to make big gains, but in the end they are all for the same benefit. Whether it's the martial arts world or cultivating immortality, we still have to fight for it after all. If you have one mine and I have four mines, the speed of development is not as simple as just four times higher. Especially for cultivating immortals, the gap is more than a thousand times. And the protagonist will definitely interact with various people in the future. You can't write a book like a monk in Feilu, right? Moreover, most readers of Fluoro like to be straightforward. A character in a novel always pretends that he doesn't care about girls, and then develops a relationship with her afterwards, pretending to be a gentleman.