Anime Crossover: A Ghostwriter in an Ordinary World

As long as the protagonist dares to hold a book signing, this signature will not be enough for him

I just like the author's unruly style. So many people are complaining about plot issues, so he just pretends to be dead and continues writing. It's so good. The heroine's parents come to the door and tell the protagonist not to go out, but they really won't go out? Don't dare to face it? Considered a man? What? Let girls face it alone? Don't you have any sense of responsibility? No matter how much money he makes, he is still a social bastard, you know? Then he was taken away by his family, and the protagonist didn't even call to ask. He waited for others to come over and ask for help. Is the protagonist considered a man? Is this how you create the protagonist's image for the sake of the harem? Isn't this just a scumbag? Do you think your writing is excellent? In fact, you are an S ratio!

To be honest, if the protagonist's identity and writing ability were directly revealed to the heroine's parents, would there be so many things? Just force your wits down! It can only be said that this is a bad move. You must have a female protagonist to get a harem, right? Even if you write that the heroine loves the protagonist so much that she agrees to a harem, or something outrageous, but the hero is too strong and the heroine cannot bear it alone, she agrees to a harem! Even if it's outrageous, it's better than what it is now, right? It's a pity, because the previous writing was obviously pretty good.

Do you really dare to force a heroine to be offline for the sake of the harem? Can her parents find her an elite whose salary in ten years is equivalent to that of the protagonist in one year? The protagonist is so popular now that he can just rest on his laurels for the rest of his life. Just forget about it and push him away? Shiyu's family has a mine that she wants to inherit?

The current plot is very fragmented, and the heroine is forced to be offline because her parents do not agree. . . The key is that when something like this happens, the protagonist doesn't take the initiative to go out to explain or show off. Instead, he puts the matter on the heroine and lets the heroine bear it alone. Although this is what the heroine herself asked for, it's just a little girl saying so. What is your responsibility as a man? What do you think this behavior looks like to the heroine's parents? They were already very unacceptable, but now the male protagonist's behavior seemed to confirm their thoughts, giving them the feeling that an unreliable boy had abducted their daughter. Don't you think this conflicts with the protagonist's character? The subsequent discussion about the male and female protagonists having a harem is also inexplicable and makes people feel speechless. The male protagonist's character is completely shattered. It's not that you can't have a harem, but you have to at least stand up and take responsibility. You might as well just write it as a novel about a single female protagonist who only loves you. In this way, even if the harem party is not happy, at least the single female protagonist and some casual readers will support it. Look at how many people are commenting now saying that this plot is unreasonable. I suggest that it should be changed, otherwise it will be really poisonous. Adjust your thinking and ask the editor to give you permission to revise the latest one or two chapters. Of course, the above are just my opinions and suggestions. If the author really thinks this is good, that's up to you. This book is actually very well written. I have already ordered it all, so I will wait and see.

Say you code! I want my money back. If I had known I had subscribed, I should have come to the comment section and read it. What the hell was written? In order to open a harem, I forced you to log out, senior sister. It was a fun read but you caught me off guard and fed me Yoneda Kou. The reader ran away after feeling disgusted.

**The author is a scumbag male protagonist. It's really cool to force him to find a female protagonist in order to open a harem. I'm speechless. What kind of harem can a weak man open? It's such a waste of my money. I don't think readers will like it as long as they have no brains in harem stories.

Force your current girlfriend to go offline in order to start a harem? Or is it because of a funny reason that his parents don't agree with, that the so-called elites of his parents can earn more than the protagonist in a month? Parents want their children to live a good life, not to find an elite to satisfy their perverted psychology of comparison! Something happened to the orphanage in front of me. At first I thought it would be good to have a stable payment every month, but it turned out that a major incident had to hold me back. I was really embarrassed. If you write novels like this in Feilu, whoever dies will die, so be it.

If you take someone else's daughter and her parents are at home, do you really want your girlfriend to face it by herself? Don't you dare to go out?

Readers have been scolding me in the book review for almost two days. The author can actually update it steadily while pretending not to explain. This is awesome. I have been waiting for more than a day. If there is no explanation by night, we will ask him to come out of the bookshelf.