I Just Awakened the Mori Mori Fruit, and the Akatsuki Wants Me to Join

After reading a few chapters, I was hooked. You should at least respect the original work when writing Naruto. Scorpion made himself a puppet, so you retained one core. You also wrote about breaking ribs with one punch and sucking wood to dryness.

He's got a piece of weasel shit, he's so self-indulgent, and he's carrying the village weasel on his back?

Except for the regeneration core, the whole body of the scorpion is a puppet.

Earlier, Scorpion met the protagonist and said that the protagonist has very amazing chakra. Later, Pain and Kakudu said that the protagonist's chakra is very small. This contradiction is too obvious.

Do you think Xiaonan can't deal with Yiwei?

Why is it that every time Xiaonan is written by the author as if she is a burden? She is not allowed to do anything, but cannot do it well, which only adds to the chaos. Author, if you want to cut Xiaonan, just let her stay alone, okay? At least his film-level abilities are written like a second-guessing character

I chose Sensen Fruit because I am not familiar with it. It is also a talent. What if Sensen Fruit is really used to plant trees? Is there no need to write novels? It's such a fruity fruit, but the protagonist can only cosplay Hashirama. Isn't it a bit outrageous?,,,,

It's a novice article, just read it if you can accept it, the writing style and logic are not very good.

I just said that I got the Sensen Fruit to absorb life force and energy, but later I was surprised that I could absorb energy? Also, you are a Sensen fruit, what is the name of your move? Do you really think that you are an anime character and you have to call out your name when making moves?

The protagonist who has never refined chakra has huge chakra