Miracle Skill: The Slam Dunk

Why create an original heroine??? I'm most afraid of this kind of thing

Originally, the scenes between Ayako and Haruko were switched to her? What's the point? Or are you planning to end the ambiguity between Ayako and Haruko? How about a escort girl in Ferru? The appearance of this character can be said to be meaningless and only feels abrupt.

Why don't you light a seven-star lantern? In the future, when you run out of time, you can light it and force overtime until you win.

What we are watching is the daily life of cuteness. Suddenly love becomes normal and the cuteness loses its taste.

You can keep the character of a foodie, but if you can, change it like a natural idiot. If you are a natural idiot, try to become naturally black or pure evil. After all, Slam Dunk is still a quite humorous work in general.

You already have the formations, so why not add something more? There is a series where the game is played in the universe. Should you consider letting the protagonist participate in it? I want to know which one is more powerful, the aliens or the formations?

It's not that you can't have a fanfic, the premise is that the writing is very brilliant, but this one obviously doesn't have it. An original heroine appeared out of nowhere and confessed her love for no reason in three chapters. I didn't even understand what was written, so I just stopped talking about it at once** I read half of it

I always feel that the name is awkward. The author can use the name generator. It can be seen that the author is a newbie, especially in terms of naming.

Although the character can be repaired, it's too annoying and I don't like it.

There is no need to write down all the abilities every time. It would be better to just make it clear.