Age of Discovery: The Straw Hat Crew's Magician

If you can't write harem, then please don't tag harem. Are you trying to be a bitch and still want to erect a memorial arch? The harem was marked. In the previous book, you ended up with either one woman missing, or pushing one or two. This is your harem. It was ambiguous the whole time, and you didn't get any blood until the end. You can't be a eunuch! The one by Qinglong was completely unfinished, and I haven't won any of it yet. In the book Noble Master, they also forced kisses, and only pushed a few towards the end. If you really can't write, can you just not mark it? There is no situation where you are asked to write even if you don't know how to write. Are you doing this to attract attention? To get more attention? They are no longer able to complain. If you don't know how to write and are not allowed to write, can't you just write it off in one go? Straight up a night, some blood. Isn't it over?

Can you stop hanging sheep's heads and selling *meat? If you don't know how to write harem, you don't need to use the label harem. If you just flirt and don't accept it, you may have a problem with your sexual ability! I only received two out of more than four hundred tickets, and I only slept with him once? If you can't do it, just say so. This is just standing around and not taking a shit. Holding the harem label to attract attention

In this book, you are not just a nanny, but almost their biological mother... Go read One Piece: Legend of the Sea of ​​Stars. Personally, I think the plot in the first half of that book is very good. Accompanying the protagonist group to grow up and take adventures together, that's what you call a serious follower.

Why? Why do most of the One Piece fan novels try to find ways to give protagonists? Find a few more women, whether they are original or added by the author himself, why do you try to change the adventure blood flow into a harem love flow?

Give Teigu as a gift when you meet him, and feed him along the way to ensure he becomes stronger. To be honest, it's very awkward to watch. How can one person support a team and also act as a deputy! Kindness turns into hatred, you said that it is enough to let them exchange their rare treasures at equal value, but you give them away the Teiju that you have accumulated over the years and made, you are really a treasure-gifting boy!

I just want to say, can you not lead the harem to the Hat Pirates? If so, wouldn't it be better for you to build your own pirate group?

You are full of water, and you are still on an empty island for more than two hundred chapters. The original book went to sea to Xiangbo Island for a few months, but you are still on an empty island for several months.

Brother, I am really convinced that there is no book in which you do not boast about the Six-Style. Now I feel that the Six-Style is not the standard skill of the CP organization, but you are better than the standard skills of the protagonist in the novel. A giant more than 20 meters tall also practices the Six-Style, what kind of increase can there be! Your setting of Six-Style 2 is too exaggerated. It is just a basic game. Didn't you see that Lucci, who appeared later, didn't use Six-Style as a standard move in his moves? In the later period, pirates mainly focus on domineering and ability. Those who have no fruits will work hard to practice physical skills or swordsmanship to supplement domineering. The same is true for those who are capable. Good guy, I still remember in your novel about the protagonist of the Giant. After the protagonist accepted Bundy Walder, a big pirate like Walder who traveled all over the world was brainwashed by the Six Styles. Instead of focusing on developing fruit abilities, he focused on attacking the Six Styles every time. Isn't this putting the cart before the horse?

Old author, quality assurance, please feel free to collect and collect. Every new book that has just been released is like a green plant that has just been planted and urgently needs everyone's support and watering. Please don't be stingy with the flowers and tickets in your hands. If you have any comments, you can put them forward. The author will read them. Thank you for your support^_^!

What's the difference between this rewriting and the original? It's sloppy. The protagonist is so weak, the hat team is so weak, and there is no plot of Blackbeard killing Sengoku to attract the attention of the navy. No matter how the author writes later, it seems that he is forcibly lowering the IQ of the navy and the world government, and it has collapsed.