Slaying the Firmament

It's hard to find a normal book, but the content is still emm. I personally don't expect it very much. Don't blame the author, but I'll give you some comments: 1. First of all, I don't care about the writing style. I can understand it anyway, but I think most readers can't understand it. It's clumsy and doesn't fit in with the novice writing of this era. 2. The plot and story are old-fashioned and not easy to attract readers in the early stage. 3. Thank you for writing about the protagonist after six or seven chapters. I suggest that the previous plot should be moved to a side story, or changed to a prologue. 4. The paragraphs are too long, and the number of words in a paragraph is too long. Just like the first chapter, one paragraph occupies a page. Most of today's readers read ten lines at a glance, but they don't have the patience to read densely packed words. Most of them skip. In fact, one sentence can also be written in several paragraphs. 5. The world written is too grand. It's okay in the early stage, but it's easy to get lost in the later stage. Let's not talk about it, it's quite satisfactory but has no highlights. Basically, I can't read the chapter about the protagonist, and most readers stopped reading it.