
Great Ming: This Is a Disaster! I Was Exposed Right After Becoming an Immortal
大明:夭寿了,刚成仙就被曝光
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.4M Words
- Genre
- Military & History
- Subgenre
- Time Travel
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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1.7kChapters
18.7MReads
179.9kFlowers
9.9Score
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Cultivation as an immortal is all about having clear thoughts. You, an immortal cultivator, can't do this or that. It's just a piece of cake. You'd still be dead long ago. Just count the balls.
The Immortal Cultivator is not good at this or that.
I'm really impressed by you. You even gave up family ties in order to cultivate immortality. It seems that your character is not very good in real life.
After all, we are good friends (^.^)
We are good friends after hunting wild boars!
Zu Xia, Huang Shang, Tian Zhou, Xian Qin, Shen Han, Sheng Tang, Dao Song, Mo Yuan, Wu Ming, Yao Qing,
Saving a few losers is not a single-minded effort. It is better to save a few capable ministers, such as Wang Yangming, Yu Qian, Hai Rui, and Zhang Juzheng.
As mentioned, if Zhu Xiongying's identity is known in the future, what about Zhu Yunxi? Wouldn't your own brother in this body save you?
I've seen dozens of them and I'm really not interested anymore! Cultivation? Fix your sister! A plant
At this point in the book, I am looking forward to the follow-up, which is either the third one, recovery, promotion, or return. This way of writing is actually a problem of the plot advancing too quickly. It is easy to understand and feels good, but the protagonist has no sense of existence. Then why not change your mind and write about an ordinary world. There is no need to crazy about fighting power. As long as the protagonist has powerful abilities and travels around the world. Or just become the only and most powerful heavenly civil servant in the world. At that level, you don't need to have a high status. You can travel in various worlds, or meet a few mortals, or encounter immortal species, or encounter evil in the world, or meet people of the same path. Friends invite you to travel around the world together, fantasy, daily life, cities, the West, etc. You can experience everything in this world. This kind of infinite flow can also be very enjoyable. If the writing style is delicate, the original world will be endlessly exciting.