Pokemon: Huge Power Slaking from the Start

He was irresponsible for what he did, and even scolded girls for being unreserved. Why not just one night? Is it reasonable to say that scum is still scum?

I really like the setting and it's easy to read; The shortcoming is that he is too scumbag and cannot be replaced. In fact, I have to write a scumbag setting; Don't write irresponsible things, it's really not likable.

I didn't expect that there would be so many people who didn't like the protagonist's scumbag character. The author will try his best to correct it later and change it to a harem. He is a scumbag and never abandons his daughter. Is this what you want? However, the protagonist has never given up on any heroine so far. As for Zhen Na's problem, the Dragon City will arrange it!

A good theme, but it was ruined by the protagonist

It's such a pity that an elf novel was ruined by a scumbag protagonist. The author is so confused.

They are all at the King level, and it would be outrageous for your elites to fight against the King across levels. Still crushed. .

Author, please reopen. It's a good subject matter. I don't want to read it just because of the character of the protagonist. I've read apocalyptic dark novels and so on. I've even read those harem novels in the old days. But this kind of scumbag, I'm really a ****. I've only read about 40 chapters. The subject matter is not bad.

I can't afford to offend you. I can't stand this kind of threesome.

How should I put it, author, you are more suitable for writing romance, not fanfiction

It's pretty good, but there are too many descriptions of emotions. After all, it's an elf novel. Sometimes there are no elf in a few chapters, just trying to pick up girls.