Mixed Martial Arts: the Master in the Town of Seven Heroes

You don't have to write female characters, but you can't send them.

Usually all are women. It's not that there can't be women, it's just that all Feilu have female characters at the beginning. . It's hard to read. This book is very good. The apprentice is male at the beginning. There are also a lot of female characters but I can accept it. After all, it is much better than other novels.

Author, you are writing about a low-profile prehistoric era. Once the innate spiritual treasure contains innate immortal aura, how can it be damaged with the passage of time?

The title of your book is simply called Huajian Tihu. That's what you've been writing about, and you still have the nerve to call it Infinite Film and Television.

Are you serious about asking Zhang Wuji to be a cicada for twenty-three consecutive years? Are you sure Zhang Sanfeng won't fight against the protagonist?

If the contact is not arranged from the beginning and no intention is revealed, then the empress will not want it. But since you have written it, the empress should accept it. At most, you will be scolded as a bitch. If you don't accept it and leave it to the * hat, then it's really poisonous. If you really write it like that, I estimate that your book's performance may plummet like an avalanche.

After reading the introduction, few people will read the content. The author should find a class. Stop harming readers

Even if there is an extra review, although this kind of list is easy to be fooled, you are not that stupid. You treat the readers as fools, but you don't know that the readers know it in their hearts. If you want to do well on a subject like yours, you should focus on describing the plot after knowing the list, rather than directly copying and pasting the original work, then commenting a few sentences, and then starting copying and pasting again.

This is too much. Hyperjetton is far worse than Gliza. Even if Hypajeton stood here, Greeza wouldn't be able to break through his defense, and Greeza would still materialize when he attacked. Even if it was only for a moment, Hypajeton would be enough to destroy him.

The pig's trotter system feels dispensable and is drawn once every thousand years. Author, please check how long it takes for the pig's trotter to be drawn from the first system draw. I have read many chapters since the first draw and it is difficult to see the second draw. You said that this system is useless, and it also draws some **** things. Either get rid of the system, or don't have such a long interval between draws. It doesn't look like much and feels like water.

Chapter 2, Mom: "Your grandfather, Minister Ernest, will also come to celebrate your sixth birthday." . . . . . . This looks too awkward

In order to create contrast, what's the point of forcing the Skeleton Summoner to be so weak? . .

I suggest you go next door????. There are many big guys who write about Jojo there. They can send private messages and post guidance. There are also many big guys who have good control over the battle scenes and plots. The author's writing style always shows a green flavor. It is very helpful to be mentored by others. I hope the author will consider it carefully.

The latest novel with nearly 20 million words? ! ! ! Blind!

The true spirit has not dissipated, but both body and soul have been destroyed, but a saint can't save it? They say you can only tell the subtle things, but it shows that your power level is not very good either.

After reading the first few chapters, the subject matter is okay, but what is it written about? I feel good writing it myself, right? It just feels like writing whatever comes to mind. The dialogue is also completely wrong, without any foreshadowing. The interaction between the protagonist and his master is just a joke. You don't want to be funny like this, you know how awkward it is... **

Two chapters updated in one day is too few. Please update more.

Speaking of which, you may not believe it, but I estimate that I will have to write the second generation in early August. If you don't believe me about the subsequent plot, I found that there is basically no need to write the last thirty chapters of the original plan, so I estimate that the plan will be moved forward.

The second generation will be released when school starts in September

The protagonist is written in a very vulgar way and the first and third person points of view are not clear! The words in your heart should be "I", how could it be "him"? ]

Jie Yuan is the first in the provincial examination. If you win three Yuan in a row, Jie Yuan, Hui Yuan, and No. 1 Are what you mean.

It's really not good to write this, and it's not good to use force.

It would be nice if the protagonist's personality changed a little, but his mentality is not very stable. For a small person like Zhang Tao, just kill him afterwards. What's the point of being with a dead man?

Brothers! Can you give me an introduction?

Come on, it's already on the shelves and it's fully pre-ordered at this level

I want to see Patrick Star's inner monologue

The plot advances too slowly. One sentence is repeated over and over again, which is frustrating.

I remember that in Marvel comics, an ordinary earthling was prompted by a friend named Chao to drink a glass of poisonous wine to death of the five gods of the universe: "Death". Without the concept of death in this universe, even the original "Molecular Man" cannot kill a flower. And the earthling who drinks death is not a powerful character, he is just a tool man who only appears once and becomes cool. Eternity and infinity are the incarnations of time and space from dimensions 1 to 10 of the multiverse. If you kill them, there will be no time and space. Annihilation is the incarnation of all "non-existence" in the multiverse: there is no time, space, thinking, matter. If you kill them, there will be no "non-existence". Why does it feel a bit confusing? There is no "non-existence"? As for the friend named Chao who I talked about at the beginning who urged the tool man to drink poisoned wine to kill "Death", guess who it is? As a reminder, he is stronger than Molecule Man.

It looks just right. Why did you go to Qin Shi? This jump is a bit big, right?

Is this, not updated at all?