Urban Elf: as a Breeder, I Am Forced to Be the Champion

This new book by the author Yang Wei has begun to be given to girls. I would like to remind all readers to treat this author's books with caution! ! !

There is a big problem with the way the protagonist speaks. When he can't do it, he will explain in large paragraphs anxiously without being asked. He explains over and over again, saying whatever comes to mind, and his thinking is extremely jumpy. Isn't this the reality that the more he talks, the more he talks. The protagonist is a time traveler. Apart from the plot, the biggest advantage is that he has been a human being for two lifetimes. The protagonist's style of dealing with people makes people feel that the protagonist has been a stay-at-home for two lifetimes. His thinking is childish, his speech is too straightforward, and he has no experience in life. The same goes for other characters, too taken for granted. Especially in the Double Dragon part of time and space, the protagonist can be said to have taken the initiative to offend Kyurem several times. Each time, Kyurem was beaten, and made others unable to take action, and even got angry when he did. It's absolutely amazing.

Don't look at cows This author's new book is awesome, read with caution

Because of you, the author, I downloaded Beng 3 out of curiosity. That damn chance of drawing a card really hit me, and I'm still feeling uncomfortable now. Pooh

The girl doesn't like it but loves to write. It's obvious that YW wants to have a harem, but the writing is not up to par. Just like if he wants to describe getting a bottle of Coca-Cola in the refrigerator, he has to describe opening the refrigerator, taking out Coca-Cola, and closing the refrigerator. Most of the plots are like this, and it's annoying to death.

This table is a green turtle

Most of the people who have good relationships with the protagonist are women, most of the gym leaders are women, and so are the rich people. Is the author short of women? How can a fan fiction be so boring?

Author, you have changed. You used to write about Cecilia and Lusamine. You even wrote about Cecilia before. The situation you mentioned does not exist. Many people who write about Honkai Impact have Cecilia, and Pokémon also has Lusamine. In the situation you mentioned, you only need to change the relationship. It is true.

Is the author Mi Xiaozi, the original version of the Elf text?

Why, give your new book a low score and lock me in a dark room, right? If you dare to write it, don't take it seriously, right?

How can someone write an elf novel and regard Pikachu as the evolved form of Pichu? It's a reverse upgrade, right? Have you seen it? It's just a matter of popularity, right? I don't even understand it.

There are a lot of people here. Brothers, I would like to ask for some comprehensive comics, no cp, no lily lightning protection, and full of interesting books. I will be on guard.

Ying: "Sooner or later, everyone who calls me Ying will die."

This author, I find that all the books you write are like that, about a bunch of girls, and the relationship is grinding, and you should push it or not. I don't know whether you should push it or not until I see the ending. Even if you don't push it, whether you can kiss the little mouth and pull the little hand, I will consider you to push it. The relationship between the male and female protagonists has not progressed at all. I am really afraid that you will end up with a pure relationship between us. Isn't this *****?

Why do so many people want to marry Gardevoir across species? Do you like humans and animals that much?

Is it because Xiaozhi has not grown up because he has not evolved? Humans should also be elves, right?

After watching Fairy Tail, I feel that the protagonist is too blunt, moody, and unhuman, which is fatal. At least the male protagonist should be more refined, so that people will be interested in watching it.

Why is it like this every time? ? ? I stopped reading it and didn't follow up on updates. After a while, the novel became too eunuch.

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