Start: Landing in Qixia Town

Why does the protagonist have to join the government? It feels like the protagonist is like a fool being taken advantage of by the court.

Is the protagonist too kind to the two sisters and giving them so many things?

I would like to say that everyone should not post negative comments. Many novels are eunuchs because of these negative comments. It is not easy for authors to write books. Now there are fewer and fewer good books in Feilu. I haven't read a decent martial arts book in a long time. Most of the books in Feilu are paid for. Yes, it also shows that everyone loves novels, so just give the author some good suggestions. Don't always belittle a book. Although I rarely give rewards, I have never belittled that book in any book review. It is responsible for my VIP points to give the author a good mood to create.

Why do you have so many original dialogues in front of you? It gives me a headache.

Is this a novel? Or have you written the script for Wulin Gaiden?

剧情一点没变！就多了上赶着舔聋老太太！比看电视剧还气人！

The main character is a bit too soft!

The more I read, the more I think it's a single female protagonist. Please don't write about mixed martial arts with a single female protagonist, okay?

All I can say is that it looks awkward. Author, isn't your writing awkward? Or maybe you wrote something yourself, but you haven't read it yourself.

Hahaha, the small Wuxiang Gong is replaced by the Sunflower Acupuncture Hand

Not to mention whether the writing is good or not, it's uncomfortable to look at it when all these characters are squeezed together.

The paragraphs are too long and I can't get used to it.

If fusion genes were as troublesome as the author, the Super Seminary would have been destroyed by aliens long ago.

Say you don't know how to segment. You made the segmentation so clear during the dialogue. Say you know how to segment. You don't segment when it's time to segment. The protagonist has no brain.

It's a long paragraph, so watch it. So tired!

When Qiao Feng becomes an elder and becomes a gang leader, is it the elder or the gang leader?

This... How to say it! No segmentation ahead! After they broke up, I wrote it like a script... I often spoke without quotation marks! No modifiers! Quite speechless

For jogging, it takes at least 610 kilometers in one hour, which is ** miles. A stick of incense usually takes two hours...

About Chapter 1: Time Travel Chapter 1 of "Dazing in the World of Mixed Martial Arts" written by a master of martial arts.

It's rare for my Xu family to be the protagonists. As a result, my scalp went numb after watching it.

I won't talk about one chapter a day, but it's also water-charactered. The whole article is in the water-character state. At the end, I have to use monthly tickets to top up the number, **

Can I not add PS to each chapter?

If you send it back, why don't you check whether the chapters you sent out can be read?

The dawdle I understand is different from the dawdle the author understands So is it my fault or the author's fault?

The author's layout makes me lose my desire to read it at first glance. It's so densely packed.

Which time traveler in such a dangerous world can tolerate not receiving anything for a year at the beginning? Sign in for a year and then give someone a useless piece of shit? Deliberately slowing down the pace or is it the protagonist and the system's sand dollar? If you really want to give it, just give it happily. If you don't want to give it, don't give it. Don't be so half-giving and half-not giving. Use your golden fingers to drag the rhythm and ** the reader as soon as you start!

I clicked on the first one and lost interest in it.

Commentary on Chapter 95: System Awakening of "Dazing in the World of Comprehensive Martial Arts" written by I Am a Martial Arts Master.

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