Elf: the Affinity Is Off the Charts, and the Mythical Beast Becomes a Licking Dog

Regardless of whether the protagonist is childish or not, people who read Pokémon fandoms all like Pokémon. The way the protagonist and the mythical beast get along is unacceptable, and it's not like there aren't any highly affable themes. Others write about harmonious coexistence, so why do you always dislike it? I didn't see you disliking Pidgeot Ratatara and the others at the beginning. Why did they all change when Suicune arrived? (ー_ー)!! Also, why don't you change their nicknames? If people want to beat them up, just rely on their favorability to do whatever they want! Eight years old, a child in a kindergarten in Chengdu, Xiaoyao's younger brother, a student at Dujuan School, or Citron's younger sister, none of them behaved so ignorantly. They didn't even recognize the little ratta who was the domestic bird at the door of their own home. Don't use ignorance as a shield, sometimes it will make people more disgusting.

To be honest, I am a little speechless after looking at the last few pictures. Just to limit the protagonist, the opponent's champion level and quasi-god level can almost compete with the second level god. Your level is too high.

It's so damn toxic. I've read it elsewhere. Every time before a new car is released, the country ridicules such a high price, and then submits it to the jury for more than ten chapters, and then comes a super brainless villain, the rich second generation, and then pretends to be a slap in the face. The whole country shouts the protagonist nb, and then releases a new car, backhand, ridicules the whole country, gets ridiculed by the jury for more than ten chapters, and the brainless villain shouts nb throughout the country. It's so fucking toxic! ! !

The protagonist written by the author is sick, and when he comes, he gets the elixir but doesn't learn his internal strength to become an assassin? I created my own kung fu and learned an advanced light kung fu! Are you Shi Lezhi? How can you assassinate and break someone's internal protection? You have come to the world of martial arts and you don't want to learn internal strength, but you want to learn these third-rate skills? Even if you really want to learn weapons, haven't you forgotten that you are at the Dugu Qiubei Sword Tomb? Isn't it good to learn Jianyi and Dugu Nine Swords? You just don't have the internal strength. How can you digest snake bile incompletely? It's a waste of food.

Look at the introduction. Is this the ultimate enhanced version of *Hao?

Very good writing, don't write it next time

The fucking storyline and the writing made me embarrassed to death.

To put it more emotionally intelligent, did the protagonist have a cerebellar resection as a child?

Why do I feel that I started to make up random elves later on in "Thunderstorm vs. Thunder God"? Is there an elf named Thunderstorm?

I vomited just after reading the first chapter. What you wrote about the time traveler is like a mentally retarded person, and you're still fucking a big rat and a big**.

To read this book, I suggest you cut off your brain before reading it

As the title states, Mew is a first-level god.

What's the point? Just looking at you making money, I can't think of it in my own head. Woman? No worries, I obey you, brother, man, the top is your mouth, the bottom is your mouth. . You don't have any thoughts. What can I say, this kind of protagonist. . . That's neurosis.

No, what kind of logic is that? It was said earlier that the strength of a third-level god is almost the same as that of a champion. In Chapter 108, it was said that a second-level god is close to a king in strength, right? ? ? ? ? What does this mean? The first one is easy to explain, but what do you mean by the second one?

Did he travel back in time when he was eight years old or when he was eight years old? The protagonist of tnnd is like a mentally retarded person. Is he really an adult? Moreover, an eight-year-old child is in love with his family. After time travel, can he still live a normal life? ? ? What exactly is the logic? ? ?

I think this is good, but it would be better for the protagonist to be more mature. It looks a bit awkward like this.

If the beast loses this competition. . .

I originally wanted to write a review of several thousand words, but after thinking about it, I decided not to do it because it was too troublesome. Just sum it up in three words: I don't like it.

I'm so confused. The more I look at the back, the more I feel something is wrong. Is the protagonist occ? Don't do this! I still hope it's the original protagonist

After reading a few chapters, I realized that the author had not finished reading the Fairy Tail manga at all. Wendy was too weak not to be stunned by transportation vehicles. It was not because she was immune to Tianlong. Wendy, who had exploded with dragon power, also became fainted by transportation vehicles when they were reunited a year later. It is a setting that Natsu cannot beat Erza, but there is also a reason why Erza's bloodline is invincible. Erza's mother is the mother of dragons, the first dragon slayer. She split and reorganized the entire Ishgar terrain with just a raise of her hand. She is one of the top five levels in Fairy Tail comics, and except for the black dragon, Zeref, the complete Natsu END and the first generation Zeref's son, the Demon King, all other Fairy Tail characters cannot beat him. Erza has always been able to suppress Natsu, which is not to say that Natsu has never reached his potential. If you really want to say that, Natsu has the highest potential in Fairy Tail. After all, he is the strongest END. After the explosion, he is a second against everyone except the Black Dragon. Say "We are Fairy Tail" and the Black Dragon is also a second.

Is there a Yu Ji? Will you charge it? I have read several Daqin fanfics, but very few of them cut off the poppies in advance. I left Eternal Beauty alone, but instead reorganized some original characters. I really don't know what to say (hint)

In the Pokémon world, they start traveling at the age of ten and can live independently. This is basically equivalent to the IQ of a 16-year-old in the real world, right? If you are eight years old, shouldn't you have more or less the IQ of a 14-year-old?

What would my three-year-old sister call me when I'm still an eight-year-old mouse? Let's put it this way. Now that I'm three years old, I still hold my mobile phone every day. What's more, when I'm eight-year-old, I know how to play games. If I'm still a little mouse, it's understandable if you say this is three or four years old. How beautiful and so "innocent" did you live in at the age of eight?

The writing is quite good. I'm curious how you would write it for the Quartz Conference. You wouldn't just put a level 1 god on it. There is another bug to talk about. The first time the protagonist encounters a talking elf should be Rocket's Meowth, not Mewtwo.

Did the writing collapse later? Why do I feel like I can't match the previous one?

Branches cause pain in the brain when looking at branches

The aircraft has a Chinese characteristic name,

If you can't write, don't write. What the hell are you writing?

Updates are too slow. I need a eunuch.

The unscrupulous Taoist Zhetian is also a tomb robber.