
The Video Takes Stock of the Heavens, Starting with Flame Dragon King Natsu!
视频盘点诸天,开局炎龙王纳兹!
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- 1.8M Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
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- For men
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- 3y ago
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- Faloo
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Regardless of whether it is a re-grafting plot or a cuckold, I can only say that the industry is really chaotic. It is fun to watch Conan fan fiction, the reasoning, the protagonist beating Conan, the youth love story, etc. In the end, this book made me watch a family ethics drama.
In the past few days, I've been writing like a ghost. I suggest you go to the hospital and see a doctor. Could it be that there is some serious illness →_→ (? ̄▽ ̄)?
I didn't know I had a son at the age of 25. The key is that the ages are different five times at a time.
Are Saints afraid of Boros? Let's get to know the world view of Saint Seiya
Damn Zhutian, why don't you just tell me to take stock of Japanese comics? Is it true that only Japanese comics are Zhutian?
The first order is very popular, but there are still hundreds of people reading it. The little author will continue to write. I also hope that all the bosses will continue to support the little author. Thank you! ! Since it is on the shelves, there is a word count charge, so if you open this thank you building, you will give monthly tickets, rewards, and reminders to thank you in the thank you building, so that it will not take up the number of words in the main text ~
The world of inventory is all excellent masterpieces, but it is a pity that the author who wrote the inventory novel is a fool. I even suspect that the author just read the fan fiction and did not read the original work carefully before he came to write the inventory. The original characters are poorly restored.
Hisoka's chapter, what the hell? Not to mention the short number of words in each chapter, looking at the chapter list, it seems that Hisoka has traveled through time? It makes Hisoka look like the protagonist. What about taking inventory? What we want to read is an inventory, not some nonsense, it's off topic.
What are you writing about being mentally retarded? You know there is danger but you still send it to someone.
The so-called Saint Seiya, in my opinion, is vulnerable because he cannot interfere with our world. Don't blame me for being realistic. The so-called comparison of combat power in their works is actually just an incredible scene that you have seen in their works, such as the combat power of the Exploding Star Explosion Universe Explosion Dimension. It is a pity that they are only two people after all. Dimensions are not the same as three dimensions. I may not see many people like this, but I want to say that although I am talking about reality in the novel "Saint Saitama", I won't say anything else. I will just say that Saint Saitama has a small universe in his body, but his small universe is awesome. Can he fight against people in higher dimensions? Or in comics or anime, has he reflected it? If so, then I say sorry. For those who want to refute me, are there any creatures whose protagonists have been to higher dimensions? My theme here is circumference, which is limited to two dimensions. Marvel and DC are not included. I am only talking about Japanese comics.
The combat power shown by the prisoners of delicious food is much higher than that of the Super Seminary. Later, we should take stock of the Golden Tribe or Hero Tribe of the Heroic Age.
In Hokage's high-red doctrine, ninjas themselves are a privileged class. How is this different from the Senju Hashirama's one village and one country? It is better to expand the privileges of ninjas and establish a shogunate system.
One is Death Fire, and the other is Dragon Ball DC. I was so embarrassed to watch. Why don't you find some with similar settings to write about. It's really embarrassing for you to be in Dragon Ball and then in the fire sea. Write it and read it yourself
Is this a tailor's book? The title is incorrect
If you don't write about Dragon Ball, will there be nothing to write about?
What can I say, this book lived up to my expectations. First of all, the author tends to write books without a female protagonist. For this kind of development-oriented book, it is inevitable that the protagonist will meet three or five confidants in the process of growing up. It is a bit ridiculous to write a book without a female protagonist. But let's just assume that the author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas. It's not a problem without a female protagonist. If you can write it passionately, you can watch it. But you can't write well on the core theme of martial arts. It's not a question of whether to warm up slowly or not, and what you write is uncomfortable. The protagonist has just begun to develop, and you write about seventh-level superpowers and the arrival of angels. Although you just mention it, writing about it and not writing about it are completely different things. You clearly mentioned that there is someone who is far stronger than the protagonist, so the protagonist can't be lazy and can only be lazy, but you just wrote that the protagonist is wandering around. After reading books for so many years, the most annoying thing is that the protagonist wanders around when he is not invincible (or relatively invincible). If he were not the protagonist, he would have died hundreds of times.
Wang Yidi is the best-looking one, okay?
Come on, Gu Shaoshang will project to the heavens
Is Saitama the one who is said by the official author to have only the strength of Dragon Ball Super 2?
I really can't do it if I don't have the patience to read it, it's too wordy.
Hyperjackton? The combat power of Dragon Ball is not something that only Ultraman can touch.
One more thing! The day before yesterday was Valentine's Day. It is also the birth day of the computer. I wonder if you were with your computer that day... You ask me? Of course I'm with my phone
Author, can you shut up this little brat quickly?
It's a bit like the author has changed.
The author is so ugly that I have no interest in reading the novel.
Starting from Chapter 135, the character of the protagonist has completely collapsed! The Jibing Dragon King, who is decisive and decisive in killing, those who follow me will prosper, and those who go against me will perish. When he met a girl, he couldn't walk straight away. He had no emotional basis at all, and it seemed as if she was separated from her by life and death. She was very disgusting. He couldn't save his own Bai Ziying, so he started messing around outside, and even asked Jingjing to ride on his back, like a *! Isn't this persona's character really broken? Author, please explain to me, are we spending money to buy suffering? If you don't know how to write emotional lines, just don't write them, okay? And isn't your Bai Ziying a pretty good emotional line? As for special people?
This is a bit of a long lead-up. It's fine that you wrote quickly, but it didn't finish in two consecutive days.
Um. To my taste! Customized!
For example, don't use any particularly contrived words, don't use any words that are beyond the scope of imagination, don't keep saying this or that is awesome, who hasn't seen the big scene in the later dungeons? Is this the only word that can be used to imagine the range of things day by day?
Comments on the chapter "Five equal parts are not just equal parts, but also five times the responsibility" written by Ye Wuqu 33 "Getting wet in the rain".