Detective Conan: Bitter Chocolate

3. Content, the content is a bit confusing. The content can be written more clearly to highlight the protagonist's sense of existence. It's not that you can't write it this way, but writing it this way requires a higher writing power. Otherwise, the reader will be confused, and then there will be no more. Moreover, the ** chapters are not coherent, and it always feels like there is something missing between the chapters. So after you finish writing, you can read the beginning and end of the ** chapter to see for yourself whether it makes sense.

1. Cover. Without a cover, it is difficult to attract passers-by. Let's not talk about whether the cover is good-looking or not. At the very least, it must have a cover. A cover can attract some passers-by.

2. Chapter name. The chapter name looks too scattered, like a short article. This will make passersby not want to click in after seeing it. I suggest you change it, at least add a few chapters.