Naruto: The Not-So-Proper Ninjutsu Master!
木叶：不太正经的忍术大师！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
861Chapters
5.9MReads
66.5kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 50
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I don't understand this introduction. I'm late and I have the nerve to say it.
The setting and plot are very loose. I have read more than 200 chapters and I haven't had a single battle in the whole book. It is just like a daily urban novel and keeps making jokes. The protagonist's strength is said to be jounin from the beginning until now. I don't know how strong it is. The system is set to consume money to automatically develop ninjutsu, but how much the sabcd ninjutsu costs and how much the protagonist probably has. I looked confused and confused, and would have been angry if it weren't for the humor!
I really don't have the motivation to continue reading. It was okay at the beginning, but I stopped after a few chapters. Make money, build a house, Mad, are you here to see this kind of thing when watching Naruto fandom?
Why isn't the protagonist named Zhi Ge? Come on, come on, use the magic palm to stop the attack.
Is the harem still a single girl or without girls?
Brother, you can use attribute ninjutsu without attributes. Only advanced ninjutsu that require attribute changes require corresponding attributes.
Why do you end every sentence with an exclamation point? Can you please stop abusing punctuation? Please be honest and practical.
Sooner or later I will die laughing because of you, author, my superman
The writing is too verbose, with too many narrations, and needs improvement.
It looks weird, it feels a bit verbose and has no sense of substitution.