Honghuang: Are You Crazy? You Call the Jiujianxian an Alcoholic?

Sorry, you were still an alcoholic in your golden elixir stage.

Damn it, what does the Jiujianxian mean in a world like the prehistoric era with a ceiling of combat power? You write a book with no brains, just a head full of shit.

Are you crazy? You want Jiujianxian to go to hell?

Didn't I say that those who write novels cannot write novels without swords? Is the sword very strong? Pangu is stupid? Don't you know that swordsmanship is strong? Why don't you use a sword to cut down three thousand gods and demons, or use a sword to open the sky? Are Hongjun, Laozi, Yuanshi, and Taiyi all stupid? You don't even know that swordsmanship is strong? Why don't they use swords? Just because the sword is weak.

According to the setting of Honghuangliu, the saint's spiritual thoughts reflect the past and the future. Thousands of things are within a single thought. A single thought brings about the birth of thousands of universes, and a single thought causes countless lives to perish. With a single movement of his hand, he created heaven and earth, and recreated earth, fire, feng shui. Even the inferior Sakyamuni Multi-Treasure Tathagata can create a thousand worlds with one palm, known as one flower, one world, and one leaf, one bodhi. Your system is just an acquired artifact. How can you deceive a saint?

Wine Sword Fairy? Is he worthy enough to show off in the wilderness? **I can kill 100 million people with one finger.

What kind of **** thing is the Jiujianxian, who can survive in the ancient times?

Cut off the sky and kill the saints. Dare you ask, but the way of heaven is fantasy and will be rebelled against every day.

Are father and son brothers of the same generation? They are all called Chen Qianmou! If it is a compound surname, it should be called Yu, not Qianyu! Moreover, during the Qin Dynasty at the end of the Warring States Period, the capital of Guizhou had no surnames! Only clans have surnames! Moreover, there was a very taboo thing in ancient times, that is, people with the same surname should not intermarry! Since you belong to the same village and have the same surname, you are considered the same clan! People of the same race cannot intermarry! Moreover, people in ancient times were blessed when they had many children! Contraceptive facilities are inadequate! There certainly won't be just one child! During the Warring States Period, princesses were usually called Meng Yingwen, Yingtian Gui, etc. How could a Guizhou woman have a first and last name? This does not fit the historical background.

Dare to talk about killing the saint in the prehistoric era, because I feel that I have lived enough. .

I was a little speechless when I saw the title of the book. The Jiu Sword Immortal is in the prehistoric world... If you are an all-powerful man in the world of low martial arts, you can understand it, but what kind of place is the prehistoric world...

The title and chapter names seem quite domineering, but they look very awkward. The protagonist in the first picture is an outer disciple. Sanxiao is a nymphomaniac. The junior brother is so handsome. He is so handsome. I am embarrassed. Isn't it embarrassing?

It's extremely poisonous. The protagonist is too stupid. He feels like a retarded man. He even kicked the Poké Ball away and refused to give in. It looks really ****. Aren't the protagonist and gengui a combination of a green tea bitch and a licker? I didn't expect that a fan novel could have this kind of plot. It's so ****.

**Are you writing so cowardly that people will scold you? Or are you, the author, a born bitch who has to be scolded? Look at how a cowardly novel like this has been scolded, and you still dare to write it. It is already outdated. If you write it well, you must be so cowardly to write a super seminary. You will become so cowardly in an instant**

The lofty verses at the beginning are very attractive, but throughout the whole text, everyone is drunk and I am alone! I feel so embarrassed watching it! Are all time travelers like this?

I just can't understand Spider-Man in the first picture, spinning webbing?

In your book, Good Guy dates female celebrities and plays with them in various ways, which is boring to read.

A common problem in Feilu's novels is that they start off showing off too much.

Nie Feng's sword technique should be called Aohan Six Jue, not the Blood Drinking Sword. The Blood Drinking Sword is just a weapon.

Everyone likes to write about joining Jiejiao. What are the benefits of Jiejiao?

It's so boring. A clown is jumping around in front of the protagonist, and the protagonist can ignore it. I really don't know if it's because he's pretending to be a pig or because he's just stupid, or because the author is just not counting the words.

This is really stupid, really stupid. It makes readers think they are stupid.

Pirate appendix + ghostwriting, you are so awesome

Transforming into 10 minutes and 10 types of aliens is not a flaw, at least the permissions are not enough. Xiaoban doesn't know how to unlock the permissions.

After darkening Wen Keng, darkening Fan Tiankeng, then darkening Tang Xinyi, and then darkening Gong Jian, it was just dark, and there was no exciting plot at all, which was a bit disappointing.

It's just that they recognized each other, and there's no hint whether they accepted it or not. Just give me a hint.

Is it still popular to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger?

The online store that sells milk and clothing is too taken for granted.

I'm so angry that when my account is gone, I come back and see that I am no longer the same person.

With such a powerful magical talent, will he be short of money? Are all the big shots in the academy and the country mentally retarded? Don't know how to invest in a stock with such great potential?