Da Qin: I Asked You to Supervise the Country, Not to Rebuild Da Qin

The content of the article and the character creation of the protagonist are a bit **. There is no bottom line at all. And there is Little Red Riding Hood. If the system prompts you to tell who the protagonist is at a glance, it is true that the character creation is too ****.

I don't know if the author still remembers the concept of seven stars, let alone the Marvel world of the movie. If Odin can have the strength of seven stars or above, the ancient wizard has nothing to do if he has a time gem protagonist. Then the gold content of the Tower of Babel can be said to be weak. According to the main idea, those aliens According to Jiao's early reports, two or three stars have the highest combat power. It can be said that the failure is that he wrote Marvel too late, and it was also a movie version. As a result, the strength of the protagonist Eight Stars seems to be inferior. The first two worlds were cosmic wars that were measured in light years. When it comes to a small place like Marvel, the gap is really huge.

I don't understand why many authors want to write that the protagonist is very powerful but they can't write it, so they just write it randomly. If you can't write how powerful the homepage is, then don't write it. What you write is poisonous. Why should the protagonist marry Tsunade? Firstly, she has no strength, and secondly, she has no status. Tsunade is a princess after all, and she is a powerful ninja with a great reputation.

When did the capital of Qin become Luoyang?

I saw several friends suspecting ghostwriting. It must be because I didn't fully express my own thoughts. In addition, I have been having a lot of troubles recently, and my subscriptions have actually dropped a lot, but after all, this is my fault and I am embarrassed to say anything. But one thing you can rest assured is that I will never hire a ghostwriter. Later, I will also think carefully about whether I should include the ideas that sometimes pop up. Adding it blindly like this will indeed disrupt the original rhythm. This is my first time writing a novel and there are indeed many shortcomings. If you have any opinions, please feel free to comment. I will read every one of them carefully.

The Pokémon names are all given new names. I can't recognize many Pokémon and have to look them up. Author, you can't use their previous names! The name was much better before. What is the name of the 3D dragon Porygon? I was very speechless. Is there an old man who liked Pokémon back in the day who likes the name now? He clearly knows the name of the elf and other information, but after changing the name, he still asked me to find the information to match. It's annoying to see you.

Demon King, Yansheng, Damei, Tuantuan, Futuan, Teemo, Sister Zhou, just stack buffs (funny)

I thought it was quite exciting at first, but I felt bad when I saw my father who had returned after fifteen years. But seeing that the author's awareness of lightning protection was all over the place, it probably wouldn't be what I thought. I would just keep it for a while. It would be a shame if he really had been fucked.

Although it is very exciting to watch, can it be a little more realistic? The steam train travels 200km an hour? High-speed rail?

I feel like I've seen it before, so I'm reposting it.

The capital of Qin Dynasty should be Xianyang, not Luoyang

Luoyang appears several times in the book. I originally thought it was a mistake by the author, but I found out that it was written this way intentionally later, and the sense of immersion was lost.

I would like to call you the most enjoyable writer of villain novels at the moment. (Now that the website has been updated, I can't bear to look at it and I feel it has declined.) Among the high-quality villain novels I have read, you can be ranked in the top three, and the remaining two are from external sites.

It turned out to be. . . . One Ying Ze, one Ying Zixuan

The story developed well at the beginning, but after the middle part there were gaps in the story, and mistakes began to appear frequently. There are a lot of typos and typos, and even punctuation marks are omitted in the later stages of the story, which makes it very difficult to read. In addition, the writing style changes greatly in the second part of the story, and it seems to be written by another author, and the story ends.

Update! Only 9 chapters are not enough for me to have sex for free!

What a bad name, Ji Er, it's still a girl

后面还有女装吗？期待(????)

Is the author here? I would like to ask if you can update more every day. There are only more than a hundred chapters. I finished them in half an hour. I hope the author can keep writing. I will always support you. I like this book very much.

I think I can become a sister, your sister is too fragile

The devil is fine, the ultimate hunter can still kill him, don't be a steel daddy who can say anything.

Brahma covers the earth with cannons in his eyes, not with spears

Chapter 3: If you are so good at fighting, you will be arrested for robbery... Are the police in Hong Kong so awesome?

Refining and upgrading the slaughterhouse can also be collected.

Is this an explosive update? ! Chapter for two? ! Play! ! ! !

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