Martial Arts: Wudang Big Brother, Start with Unparalleled Sword Box

I haven't read it yet, so I'd like to ask the author if he wants to lick Xu Xiao and his son, or not hang on to them. It doesn't matter.

Reading the first few chapters, my God, there is still a side character saying "He is motionless, he is scared to death." This way of writing makes me cry, pretending to be X is too stiff, the way it was written ten years ago

You have to break through before the battle, this is a fairy tale, such a sword, so good at playing! It's so big, but it's still ***

Every time it gets to the exciting point, it stops abruptly. The author wants to write some exciting plots, but every time it gets to the key point, it ends abruptly because of the itching in the shoes! The author's writing skills are really average, he's a noob!

In the novel, I hope that the protagonist has flesh and blood, but in reality, I hope that the protagonist will be blood-locked.

The protagonist was startled and looked like a fool.

Aren't there thirteen unparalleled sword boxes? Were Yu Ruyi and Zhuo Zhirou eaten by the author? Can you respect me, readers? Do you think we are fools?

Kill a person, and other sects will directly send people to besiege the protagonist. The protagonist's sect is really useless, and others don't look down on the protagonist's sect at all. Wudang's own disciples killed Qingcheng, Xingxiu sect disciples, one-on-one, you dare to besiege? Do you dare to send elders?

The sentences are a bit immature. Reading this is a bit embarrassing and feels like a cancer attack.

He roared as soon as he made a move. It was so embarrassing. It was so dramatic in an instant. I was not in the mood to watch anymore.

You roared angrily, which made me a little nervous.

The psychology is too dark, you are a bullshit author, you can write about how awesome the author is, but there is no need to make other male protagonists in the original martial arts world so miserable. What kind of psychology do you have? There is no need to belittle those original protagonists, just to show how noble the protagonist is? It's so bad to knock other women's women off and write them so poorly. Which one of those protagonists is not a genius of the generation?

Author of Sabi, give it to Emei, Erbi

This is so ****. A way to show off with urban novels. Let's write about the Siheyuan. **

I think Ryder can be recruited because he's obsessed with immortality,

In these two chapters, the author opened a lot of incomprehensible games in one breath

Taibaijinxing is not as simple as it seems... If he really followed the route of settling the accounts... Is there a possibility... He had expected what would happen and knew that there were many bad debts in the sky... So he tricked Sun Wukong into settling the accounts...

Come on, keep writing.

I finally saw Monster Hunter, but I don't know when the Three-Body Problem will be released.

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Dare I ask this general, but want to enter Changshe? I wonder if you can take me with you? , Isn't this from the book "I'm Really Not an NPC"? Exactly the same

Isn't it also the Arhat's Heaven-turning Seal?

Commentary on Chapter 19 of "Hiding for Five Years, I Was Caught by the Hahahaha Crew" written by I Am Xingchenya.

There were snacks in the front, and Ollie gave them in the back.