I'm in West City: I Have a Magic Door
人在西都:我有一扇任意门
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 376k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
220Chapters
2.6MReads
23.6kFlowers
10.0Score
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The protagonist's emotional intelligence is actually written to be the same as that of Sun Wukong. He has no emotional intelligence, so no wonder he attacks the street.
Starting from the part where he inexplicably walks around in front of Frieza, the protagonist's fighting power is enough to run away from Frieza. With that little fighting power, all the actions in front of Frieza, who has a combat power of 120 million, are no different from a video slowed down n times. Frieza can completely imprison you when you talk, and then go to the sixth universe to find Caulifla? Come on, Caulifla is seven or eight years older than Goten. At the protagonist's current age, Caulifla is not even a mirror, so she was directly arranged by the author to be born twenty or thirty years early?
After reading the introduction, I want to say something, you and I, the author of Te Miao, want to go together!! I used to think that the cooldown time of Dragon Ball is one year, just throw it into the Spiritual Time Room and make one wish a day hahahaha
As long as the heroines are Bulma and No. 18, Don't ask for Chi Chi and delay Gohan.
If you take other people's fairy beans and don't give the cat some fish to eat, the author doesn't even have emotional intelligence.
When writing fan fiction, don't write about traveling through time and becoming the protagonist. You might as well watch anime instead!
Can the immortal body not even survive in the vacuum of the universe? That's still a piece of shit immortality
When Goku was sixteen or seventeen, Kaliful might have been a baby, right?
Why is it that "time always flies by"? It's okay for a few years, decades, or hundreds of years to pass by, but for you, time flies by just a couple of days...
Are you serious about the dragon clan in the introduction? Is there a bug in this card between you?