Humanity: The Weakest Talent? From the Start, I Slay Dragons!

It can be seen from the title that it is a fun article, but it is a pity that it did not capture the fun point. What are the skills of the male protagonist? Although it is not necessary to write it directly, it must be felt by readers. It can be seen from the rhythm of the article that it is not very experienced. The eager statement settings ignore the fluency, which makes it look a bit stiff. Although I pointed out a lot of things I didn't do well, I still think highly of you. I'll hone your skills and write more. As your writing skills improve, your chances of getting ahead will be greater, so go for it.

The background of the story is not explained clearly enough, such as the division of living beings into different levels, and the reasons why all spirits enter the world are revealed too little, making it seem a bit inexplicable. It can be seen that the background of the story is grand, but it does not feel grand. The identity and background of the male protagonist should have been written out early, but the opening chapter only focused on describing the male protagonist's behavior and did not write about the male protagonist's thoughts, resulting in the character's image not being established. But in summary, I have some ideas, but I don't have enough experience. There are still good opportunities in the future.