Uma Musume: Do They All Want to Conquest Me?

Everything else was fine, but the plot of having a high-caliber trainer sign with another trainer felt a bit off. If you didn't intend for Nechar to join the team, then don't describe Nechar and his relationship in the beginning. It would have been fine if Nechar had met the protagonist after signing like Little Fat Colt. Why describe him so much before suddenly having him go to a tree hole at night to vent his frustrations and get picked up by another trainer? It's such a standard "picking up a dead body" plot; if that trainer were a man, I would have thought this was a cuckoldry story.

The author himself wrote in the text that the contract between the trainer and the racehorse girl was like a marriage. It seems he wasn't unaware that having the protagonist's excellent qualities, like being picked up while venting at night, being encountered by other trainers and signing a contract is a problematic element. So why not avoid or remedy this instead of continuing down this path? Even details like the trainer Nanjo seeing the protagonist's chat history with the excellent qualities—doesn't that make it even more disgusting? Either skip the details and stop depicting the trainer accepting the excellent qualities, or simply accept both the trainer and the excellent qualities—stop with the tangled wings and all the pulling and tugging.

I'm curious about your mindset when you wrote down your excellent qualities and signed contracts with other trainers...

Why would someone cheat on themselves? If you don't have any particular fetishes, you should probably avoid this.

If you feel your writing skills are lacking, don't have the protagonist operate on multiple storylines, and then have other trainers in those storylines. Either write a good account of emperors, or write a large-scale story. This happened because of a misunderstanding, a crush, and then the other person went to someone else's team. It serves no purpose other than to disgust the reader.

There seems to be something wrong with the Uma Musume Girls' (or Uma Musume Girls') entries; they're all either cuckoldry stories or stories about becoming yuri (lesbians).

Please, you must survive. There are fewer and fewer male protagonist stories in Ma Niang fanfiction these days; most of the related searches are about yuri (lesbian) characters, which confuses me.

Chapter 1 was already discouraging, and then the protagonist was a native.

It's a pity, the writing is quite good, and the plugin is also simple and fun. But I didn't quite grasp the problem with the internal communication; it felt like the comments section had a lot more content than the main text. Was it edited out? What was it like before?

Looks good (cute)