The Rhodes Island Logistics Department Is Peaceful Today, Too

It's too AI-heavy; it doesn't feel human at all, and the main character is more like a robot.

The AI ​​flavor is ridiculously strong.

AI was definitely used; the tone and style are exactly the same as those AI-generated science popularization short dramas.

There's a deliberate sense of simplicity, and the narrative style lacks a sense of life. Each paragraph is long, but even more words are unnecessary. Because the language is overly concise and formal, the sheer volume of information makes it difficult to read. Numerous meaningless, short dialogues are crammed together like fried eggs laced with gutter oil—nauseating and unpleasant to read. The first three chapters feature lengthy, professionally presented data descriptions, but they only provide data and do nothing to advance the story. The protagonist offers no analysis or perspective on the data, no information gathering, making it a difficult read. If the protagonist had even shown some personal insight or analyzed the data, it wouldn't have been so exhausting.

A decent read, but I'm not sure if the writing style is the author's personal touch or if AI was used. The cafeteria storyline is too outrageous and long; the waste of over 30 items is simply outrageous. Rhodes Island's funds and Terra's food supply rate cannot support such extravagance, and there aren't that many nobles on the island. The characters' dialogue reads like a machine, resembling text. I suggest focusing more on describing body language, environment, facial expressions, and inner thoughts. The free version is still watchable, but its performance is hard to say if it's uploaded to a platform.

There are two simple ways to remove the AI-sounding quality: one is to refill all the dialogue with filler words, and the other is to add some subjective emotional descriptions. Even a little bit of these can significantly improve the reading experience.

Something's off, like...?

Not bad, the flavor is a bit bland. The downside is that there are too few updates. (Good/bad)

I'm so tired of reading this! What did you add to the text? #(Blue and sad)#(Ugh)

Does the author have a female lead?