Across Worlds Reincarnation: I Confess, I Wrote All the Instances

These past few chapters you've written are so awkward, neither good nor bad, just stuck in a rut. If I didn't know better, I'd think I was reading a Japanese light novel. After acting like a coward in the alternate reality, are you going to act like a coward in real life too? 😓

It seems the author's heart shattered and he ran away, abandoning the project. It seems he knows he's written a piece of garbage that disgusted everyone, and he's so ashamed he's lost even the backbone to admit his mistakes.

Hyw, are you an author who writes wish-fulfillment novels? I don't think so. Either hide until you're no longer afraid of nuclear bombs before you stop eating beef, or just be a true Homelander, Chovy! What have you gotten yourself into? You didn't even nip it in the bud, and you just used illusion magic? Hyw, are you? Now you're neither hiding nor killing, where's your Inch Stop?

While Naruto fans generally have unusual thought processes and there are quite a few idiots, not all of them are brain-dead. The writing is too exaggerated and not enjoyable. The writing style isn't great, but it could have been written more normally. Besides, you haven't even published your work yet. You might as well just ignore them. It's worse than Lu Fei's work. That Naruto arc is shorter, but it's not brain-dead. With this exaggerated and brain-dead dialogue, someone who doesn't know better would think yours is Lu Fei's version of fast-paced fiction.

Lu Zilai pulled this stunt? He walked in laughing, performed some illusions, and left without leaving anything behind? Whose circus clown performance is this? Oh, a circus where you have to buy a ticket, but the main act is free? Haha, they even have free entertainment for Jiahao? That's outrageous! #(Sweat)

The writing is decent, but the downside is that there are too many obscure passages about Naruto, making it very difficult to read. If the author had a proper understanding of Naruto, it could have been written much better, but unfortunately, they didn't.

You really need to revise this. These two chapters are so low-quality; they haven't established any authority at all. If this continues, the main characters will just become Jiahao and the clown.

What do you mean? Even if you used Tsukuyomi, the situation would be much better than it is now. If you were worried about your eyes, you could at least use a three-tomoe genjutsu to teach the opponent a lesson and have a deterrent effect. But now you're like Jiahao, and they still dare to mess with you.

What the hell did you write?

What does this mean? It feels like the main character in these pictures is all bark and no bite; they're a bit like clowns.