In Arknights, I Became a Red Alert Commander

Write less Warhammer elements, otherwise Warhammer imps will multiply like cockroaches.

Let's talk about some Ace Combat's cutting-edge technology. You almost never see articles about this. AC8 was finally released as a major title, and it was really fun to play.

Red Alert is already an invincible path, why bother with Warhammer Bones? Arknights and RTS elements are already too numerous; I'd be grateful you even managed to get a coal truck at the start.

Dawn of War is also an RTS game.

There are too many elements, and the more you read, the more self-indulgent it becomes, but it's not too bad. As for other aspects: meme elements (rating +), excessive memes (rating -). In my opinion, this is a novel where the author lets loose and seeks a few like-minded readers (it has forensic evidence, deus ex machina, and a lot of entertaining memes, so I can't determine the main atmosphere of the book; it doesn't feel right... A hodgepodge?).

I don't recommend having the protagonist frequently clap their hands together and suddenly an army appears out of nowhere in various events... This is too straightforward, lacks conflict, and doesn't showcase the protagonist's personal abilities... The more you use it, the less valuable you become. When the system does everything for you, and the main character only needs to be a rubber stamp, it eventually creates a feeling that anyone could be the main character... To put it extremely, I don't even want the overpowered system to directly provide the protagonist with any substantial military support. Ideally, it would provide technology, raw materials, and at most a top-tier, rare talent and some special weaponry. You want to be able to slap an army of soldiers into the protagonist's face with a simple clap... It just doesn't feel real, you know? While it's true that stomping on weaker opponents can be very satisfying at first, it's like playing a game with a powerful ability like Wind Spirit or Moon Shadow. After the initial thrill, you quickly get bored due to the stat imbalances.

It's a case of false advertising, a bunch of misleading claims. You'd be better off writing a decent Red Alert game; the readership would be several times higher.

Please reduce the Warhammer elements. After reading so many base-building games over the years, this is the first time I've ever hated a work this much.

The book's descriptions of weapons feel odd: firearms are incredibly lethal to the Terrans, but the descriptions of the power of armored vehicles and artillery are too limited. The greatest advantage of the Terrans' robust physique isn't their ability to withstand bullets with their bare hands, but rather that their regular army is equipped with thicker armor; averaging level 5 body armor, they still move with incredible speed. But it would be really ridiculous if a tank cannon couldn't penetrate a Patriot missile; one shot from a steel needle would probably send the Patriot missile team mortally to its death.

It's strange. They've clearly got a cheat code for Warhammer, but they just don't use it. The oil enthusiasts don't work on promethium, which can be used as both fuel and fusion material. Instead, they use coal-to-oil conversion. Both involve carbon chain recombination, and the oil enthusiasts' carbon chain recombination byproduct, corpse starch, is edible. Metals are not needed; they are lightweight, hard, and tough, and can be used as armor or building beams. The production process is so advanced that even feudal times could produce them. The energy source doesn't need to be some kind of miraculous plasma reactor that can supply electricity to hundreds of billions of people in the capital, and its lifespan is estimated to be in the thousands of years. These materials sciences exist but are not used. Warhammer technology seems to be only needed to defend against Black Serpents in the early game, so Tychus appears briefly. We could have used Warhammer's incredible materials science and productivity, combined with Command & Conquer's reasonable weapon design and application planning. Or perhaps these cheats are too big to retract after writing, so the core force can be mass-produced by using clones and knowledge indoctrination from tech enthusiasts. Even if this cheat is too big, there are still knowledge-sharing sessions with experienced professionals to train a large number of grassroots political workers. However, considering the author banned Yuri, it's likely they didn't want him to be invincible from the start and leave the story unfinished. So why bother adding a freak at the start? Just add a Titan, that's what I've always been concerned about!