Cultivating the Uncanny Immortal Way in Honkai, Haunted by a Ghost from the Previous Era!

It's very abstract. If you're just practicing, I'd say it's okay. But if you're just looking to make a living, I suggest you go to Tomato (a Chinese writing website), at least there people there won't bother criticizing your writing.

This book has too many flaws. It starts by blatantly attacking Theresa. While Theresa does have many shortcomings, it's really not fair to make things so difficult for the protagonist, especially by ambushing people at night. She's not that kind of diligent person. Especially since you, the protagonist, knew that what you were doing was dangerous, why didn't you find a safe and secure room, and instead just picked a place that was so easy to be disturbed? What's even more outrageous is that you only have this much life left, yet you willingly choose to be in the eye of the storm at St. Freya Academy? You can just run off to the wilderness to live in seclusion and perform rituals in secret; who would bother you? The most unbelievable thing is that you wrote a story about supernatural beings, but the protagonist summons Alicia instead. That's like borrowing a character. If you had written about Mebius, you could have captured the eeriness of the snake, and the story of the protagonist outwitting and outfighting Mebius would have been far more fitting than Alicia. Finally, what's truly baffling is that you're fabricating bizarre events out of thin air in the Honkai world. If such a thing really existed, would Otto have bothered with that kind of plan? The more of this kind of plot you write, the less people want to read it. Because you've completely strayed from the point. Honkai is the theme, not the supernatural beings. If you could somehow force a connection between the bizarre and Honkai, that would be acceptable, but that's clearly not the case here.

Hey, the protagonist's a goofball, right? Why did he even go to the Valkyrie Academy? If he wanted to live, shouldn't he find a boss and cast some curses? One curse could last him a lifetime. The worst part is he uses half his life to make someone else sick for a few days. How can you cultivate immortality by directly confronting heaven and earth? You should use the right timing, location, and feng shui to cast curses!

Anyone who finishes the first chapter and doesn't run away is a genius.

While I'm not against AI writing novels, you could at least manually remove the AI-sounding elements from the story; you can't just leave everything to AI.

This is utter garbage! It's ridiculous that this kind of book even made it onto that list and was recommended to me. The very first episode introduced a mysterious little character, completely ruining the character's persona. #(Vomit)

What rubbish! In other books, the protagonist is either incredibly wealthy or cautiously navigating life, but yours is neither of those, yet it's still shrouded in weirdness? After indulging in the dark side, hurry up and distance yourself from history.

If Shuke could rate it, it would at least be 6 stars. The character design is out of character; the protagonist remembers things from the first chapter but forgets them all by the fourth. The "victim-centric" trope is also outdated. In short, it's either practice material or AI; it shows a lack of care.

It's hard to write this smoothly, so if you see this, run away quickly!

How did this thing get listed as a popular new book? #(Vomit)