What Color Will a Blank-Slate Uma Musume Be Dyed?

The explanation was given, but to be honest, it wasn't widely accepted. The author spent several pages explaining why Daiyusaku suddenly burst into action and won, but which of those racehorse girls in the front row wouldn't go all out for victory? I don't believe that Teibo's desire to win wasn't stronger than Daiyusaku's, given how long she's been stuck in second place. In terms of mind, skill, and physique, could Daiyusaku possibly suppress Teibo? Teibo and Aldan, those with domains, were suppressed by Hikari's domain, not kicked away. Daiyusaku rushed up from behind, and during the time she came into contact with Hikari's domain and had an epiphany, they just let her pass? And Daiyusaku can go from not even touching the domain gate to perfectly mastering Hikari with just a glance? That's a bit of an overkill. I could accept it if you let her run the same race or even let Teibo pull off a surprise and give her the championship, but this upset by Daiyusaku is really not good. Or, to put it another way, if you want Daiyusaku to be the one to pull off this upset, you don't need to raise her foundation a bit, make her a little higher than McQueen. McQueen is basically a champion without a specific domain, how much higher can she be? She just glanced at something and immediately grasped it more deeply than Hikari, and then unleashed a flawless attack. Since she has this kind of comprehension, she shouldn't be without a domain. Has she, a veteran, never seen anyone with a domain before, and had to wait until now to pull off a big one? The author should reconsider. It's not that I'm trying to teach the author how to write, and I just hope the book continues to be good. The author needs to be more careful with such unexpected plot twists.

Xiao Bai Zhui Xue knows that a good viewing experience directly surpasses any good opera. Where did this random passerby come from that got blown up by the main character? Even if you change it, it's useless; a loss is a loss. #(Laughing and crying)

I've already said it's not about losing, it's about losing to Daiyusaku. Why do you have to lose to Daiyusaku? There are so many people who can lose to others, people whose losses are acceptable to readers. Why do you have to choose the one that's the most unacceptable to readers? I checked Yusaku's biography. She only had one Game 3 and one Game 1 victory, and 11 wins in 38 races. That's not a great record. Arima broke the record, being 1.5 Horse lengths faster than McQueen. Look at the protagonist's previous races against McQueen; McQueen didn't even finish in the top three in the Japan Cup, so you can't see him. Before that, in another race, he was 1.5 Horse lengths faster. Yusaku Arima was 1.25 Horse lengths faster than McQueen. After your buff, I'd admit she's stronger than McQueen. But McQueen has characters like Apollo, Ryan, Ardan, and Emperor ahead of her, especially Emperor. How many of these buffed characters do you think Yusaku could beat? Your author's perspective might be different from the readers', but I think she wouldn't even face Ardan. At most, Apollo and Ryan. With a full power spike, she might face Emperor or Ardan, meaning she couldn't win even with a slightly weaker power-up. And this power-up was given to her by the author. You said you wanted to write about growth, and maybe you'll write about mental growth later, I don't know. But here, your performance is actually regressing, which is very unpleasant to watch. And this regression is comprehensive, including your competitive mentality. I accept your reason for not being able to use "Radiant Talent," but then why is your masterpiece so flawless? And that's just your own criticism; it's like your masterpiece skipped over the entire genre, jumping directly from "Radiant Talent"/"Refined Through Trials" to "Flawless." And your leg still wasn't broken in the end? If the Great Masterpiece can be unlocked, why can't others? Why can't the Lightspeed Studios unlock it? Is it because of the pressure, as you said, that it can't be unlocked? Only those that break easily can be fully unlocked? Then why can the Great Masterpiece be unlocked flawlessly? Guangbao's condition has regressed to its previous state. Two months of preparation yielded absolutely no improvement; the physical growth and resulting numerical growth are not visible, nor is the technical growth. Furthermore, your explanation sounds like you're taking advantage of Guangbao's lack of a mother, which I find extremely annoying. There are many other good scenarios to address this issue, but you insisted on writing it this way within this particular competition. You could have even arranged for Guangbao to have a private race with Haixing, where he lost, and then chatted with astronomers in Haicheng to resolve this issue. You didn't do that; you just skipped it. I'll assume you have a later plan. You think breaking records in upsets is valuable, so why can't you change it to a similar story? The changes aren't many; you could write that Guangbao (the author) gave up the main role to accommodate the better work. There are many ways to handle this. You chose to use a low-popularity character, or even a character with significantly lower theoretical strength, to defeat the protagonist's undefeated streak in a crucial match, all for the sake of your so-called "growth." This approach is terrible, arguably the worst. Readers and authors have different perspectives. We can't see your outline. This is equivalent to 40+ chapters, 10+ days of anticipation, only to have the protagonist's undefeated streak defeated by a character almost no one has ever heard of. The author's expectations are dashed, and this situation is very likely to occur. It's only because you didn't release it that it's a huge flop.

In the story, Hikari lost her race and her undefeated streak was disappointing, but not unacceptable. However, the fact that she lost because she didn't unleash her full potential, didn't give it her all, felt frustrating. There was also a sense of pity, as if she let Yusaku win. If Yusaku knew his victory was due to his opponent not giving it his all, he would also be angry. Giving your all in a Uma Musume race is a sign of respect for each other, and Hikari's apparent letting up felt like an insult to the race. I wanted Hikari to give it his all.

Is there a risk of problems if I politely ask about the Aldan pairing? My fragile heart can't take another shock after the experience with Zero and Inari Kagura (ಥ_ಥ).

What's with this whole "complaining about the Sun God" thing? She was here first, and she's the one helping the protagonist with everything, so how come Ardan is suddenly the female lead while my Sun God isn't even worthy of showing up at a romantic comedy scene? Is she just some random passerby?

150,000 Words and still no contract? #(Scared)

Remember, some readers are glued to their books and don't see your outline. They're also less likely to notice your foreshadowing. Reading habits also play a role; most people nowadays prefer fast-paced, action-packed stories, and your previous work met those standards, even featuring an invincible protagonist. Readers who read that have a different threshold. And regarding the horse race in "The Great Master," I believe that most people in China who watch horse racing are just casual fans or play horse racing games; very few actually watch historical races. Even if it's free, probably few people will see it. Readers didn't expect it, and those who sensed something was off initially thought it was a joke, leading to irreversible consequences. You even have a backlog of chapters, so many that they're difficult to revise. It's just a pity. #(Blue and sad)

What do you mean by saying that Sukuna being defeated by a third-rate sorcerer is more satisfying than narrowly losing to Gojo Satoru? What were you thinking when you wrote this book? I have no problem with the protagonist losing to any member of the main group, but suddenly coming up with this kind of unexpected plot twist is essentially disrespectful to the characters you've created.

Losing a match? Sure, but don't try to establish an almost undefeated persona from the very beginning. What the hell is this? He was undefeated from his debut, had a classic three-crown 7-G1 series, and then Arima was upset by 16 popular players, breaking his invincibility. He was then brushed off by a bunch of readers complaining that "there are too many drafts to revise" and they weren't even willing to make a slap on the wrist.