What If a Fairy Became Intensely Dependent on You?

Good books are bound to be popular! (Laughs)

I saw this on Tieba.

It's not slow-burn anymore; the protagonist's affection for him is so quick. Even the "suspension bridge effect" wouldn't be this fast; the romance is already progressing rapidly. The only problem is that the plot twists and turns aren't quite there yet. For example, how did the trio become harmonious? Initially, Pei was wary, wondering about this seemingly inexplicable person, but later, through everyday life and a small incident, he was gradually touched and realized that there truly is a sword of love. That could fill ten or more chapters. Of course, not all ten chapters would be dedicated to the romance; it would also include how, during the process of obtaining the sword, Pei sensed the harmony among the people, but Lu felt something was amiss, then a turning point, an event, another turning point, more twists and turns, and finally, a happy ending. At first, the protagonist's refined and polite manner bordered on slick, making it seem like he was still playing a game. Perhaps it could be developed later that he gradually comes to realize the true depth of a person and the complexities of human emotions. This is just my personal opinion, for reference only.

🤔, A world-renowned Taoist genius, the starting point is too high. The later romantic brain and analytical skills seem a bit mismatched. Actually, he doesn't need to be world-renowned. If the background were lowered, a background like an ordinary female lead would be fine too. For reference only. No offense intended. Does not indicate poor writing. Just adding some layers of armor.

This writing style, this pacing... Which veteran writer started this alt account? #(Sunglasses)

Liu Ming with fire tongs

I'll take the first blood.

Okay #(crying)

It has potential, it's a really good book, but it's not popular anymore. #(Funny)

Such writing talent, what a pity for such low grades.