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I've reached episode 28. The beginning was a bit tense; the male lead is quite clownish, but the writing about Xiangzi is alright. However, it gets much better towards the end. The author probably wrote it intentionally, but it feels like they didn't quite control the intensity of the male lead's clownishness. It might get much better later on, so I can look forward to it. (I personally feel it's not AI-generated; if you think so, then you're right.) I've voted; looking forward to seeing the results. #(Cute)

You wake up and realize your superpower is immense strength, but everything is foggy and you can't see anything. You're angry, so you reach in and pull out an axe... Chaos Demons: No, how can a numerical monster like him easily defeat us mechanical monsters? Just because he's stronger?

The middle part was so awkward, like a novel from ten years ago. I don't think it's terrible, but it's just average.

It's alright, the subject matter is good, but the writing style needs improvement. The early chapters are a bit too sentimental for the average reader. And stop trying to argue with everyone. I think the author should focus on improving their writing and updating regularly rather than arguing with readers. Do you have time to read comments but not time to update? Get lost! #(Angry)

I can't bear to leave this protagonist! (Crying)

Nishimiya Shoko, xiao is not shao, I've really been led astray by the author, please change it.

The author doesn't actually like brainless protagonists; he just needs one to make it easier to control them. If the protagonist had their own personality and thoughts, the author would have to restrict them to certain limits. The protagonist has been offline for several days, and this last chapter is just filler; it's basically been left hanging. I currently have no desire to continue reading.

Honestly, Jujutsu Kaisen is poorly written. It's just pure consciousness jumping around. If you want to do something stream-of-consciousness, at least have some consciousness; if you're writing about numerical monsters, at least have some numerical values; if you're writing about an ensemble cast, don't just focus on two characters. Trying to do everything results in everything being poorly written, and it's also pretentious. That's why so many people are dissatisfied with it.

It got increasingly boring as it went on, especially the part about the curse. It felt like they were just entertaining themselves. The Xiao Sui part was a prime example. I can accept yuri or gender-bending storylines, but why make Xiao Sui suffer so much? She already had a mental illness, and they made it worse, turning her into a madwoman. She lost all sense of self later on. By the time she reached Zhou's part, she wasn't thinking anymore; she was just blindly following Xiangzi. I read fanfiction to see tragedies revised and to have some fun. This one didn't just revise the tragedy, it made it worse, and the fun was completely gone.

Since the author likes lolis so much, I strongly suggest writing about black bullets.