Terra, But What the Heck Is This Farming and Cultivation System?!

The depiction of the Yan Kingdom's court is too archaic and bureaucratic. Where did the eunuchs and the kneeling ceremony come from? And what's this about the True Dragon having the highest martial prowess? Did Yan Li even know he was that strong?

Did Shennong exist?

As long as the protagonist doesn't suffer a setback, everything is fine.

The author complained about the lack of comments, so I'm writing this sharp critique. Having read 50 chapters so far, I can only say that there are no exciting moments or impact, the pacing is too slow, and it's not engaging enough. This can be seen from the introduction. The crop's resistance to Originium is 26%, which doesn't really give you a sense of what that means. The closest thing to that is saline-alkali land. Let's exaggerate a bit: The protagonist smiles mysteriously and pulls out a box of sprouted, pure Originium?! You thought it was potatoes?! Or perhaps we could turn natural disasters into nourishment: the protagonist unleashed a spell, transforming the cataclysmic storm into a cloud of spiritual energy that nourished all things, causing crops to grow even better than before the disaster. The product weighs a few hundred kilograms, which seems like a very low quantity from a numerical perspective, immediately lowering its prestige. As cultivators, we should exaggerate a bit, then obscure the specific numbers, and use some seven-character poems or short phrases. For example, when aiding Kazdel, we could say: "With a wave of the hand, the desolate city's rice waves swallow the dust, and Kazdel exudes the fragrance of wheat." Let's talk about the specifics next. Without the help of Ji and Wang, Huai Shuli SS lacks conflict and tension, and features few main characters. As the first chapter of a book, it lacks impact, has an overly slow pace, and hinders plot development. Before finishing the Great Wilderness City storyline, the author should consider adding some supporting characters or foreshadowing to interact with the protagonist, even indirectly. This would facilitate writing other chapters later. Currently, the only characters interacting with the protagonist are the Sui family, who cannot move freely, which is far too few. My personal suggestion is that the author combine Terra's various conflicts with the protagonist's farming situation to save on the word count for conflict-related content. For example, when writing the Kazdel arc later, the author might consider devising a cunning plan to tie Kazdel's military and development needs to helping with farming. Give the technology to Babel, turning Babel into the Kazdel Development and Reform Commission, guiding and dividing the forces under the Military Commission to farm while simultaneously reforming their thinking. This would make Theresis, Ducarre, and Nezre all turn against him, but they would be powerless to do so.

My son knows how to plant rice seedlings! #(Funny)

I remember reading a similar novel somewhere, except the protagonist personally cultivated the seed in the system's accelerated space, and then blurred and repeated memories. I don't remember much, but the main character was able to easily defeat the kitten in the early stages.

It's just the ultimate fantasy of agricultural science students.

I have a bit of a fear of being powerless; the protagonist's abilities can't protect his creations.

Dude, you're an agricultural celestial master working under the Celestial Master's Office, what does that have to do with the Imperial Household Department?

Author, how do you plan to deal with the Grand Commandant? His hostility towards the Sui Dynasty is extremely strong, especially based on his actions in the plot; he's definitely capable of causing trouble.