Love Should Begin After Affection Reaches 99

It's pretty good, except for the rather nauseating portrayal of Hinatsu Manaka.

Nobody's clearing the mines? The comments are all positive, but the replies reveal just how incredible it is.

I still recommend everyone check out the author's new book, "You Say This Is a Love Game." That book was too long-winded and chaotic, with a lot of references interspersed with a few plot points, and it was a bit pretentious. The constant shifts in perspective made me feel nauseous. The author's new book is much better; the plot and writing style have improved so much. The references are also much more natural, unlike the abrupt and annoying ones in this book. The female characters are well-developed and not just stereotypical, labels. The character progression and showing off are also very satisfying.

I don't understand what you want, you want to give a girl.

Oh right, in the first few chapters the main character said he wanted to become a giant of light, and then a few chapters later he was using the tired Ultraman trope. Looking at it this way, he's such a hypocrite, it's even more disgusting 🤢

The biggest problem with this book is the complete imbalance between the normal plot and the author's self-indulgent ramblings and references. This is most evident in the fact that every few lines, you'll find the author resorting to his old, tired tropes that he finds endlessly entertaining. As a result, after a while, all I remember about the book is the author's self-indulgent antics. Aside from that, for at least the first three-quarters of the story, the male protagonist is unaware that Wu is female, giving the impression of a harem novel where the main heroine is male. Furthermore, aside from these two points, the book's setting, power levels, and outline all feel like they were written on a whim, without any careful preparation. Pros: The author's awareness of potential pitfalls is decent, and the female lead's character is acceptable. If you, like the author, struggle with writing anything beyond clichéd tropes, then this book is for you.

Can anyone explain why the comment section for the author's "Dating Game" book is disabled? #(Dizzy)

Reading the old book after seeing the new one, the difference is just too big. This book is incredibly difficult to read. The two characters exchange a few words, and then it immediately turns into hundreds of words of rambling and pun-filled jokes, and there are almost always some in every chapter. Then they added the Nantong plot, and the male lead's interactions with Amamiya are very cheesy. Several female fans of BL are even shipping them, which is quite disgusting to read.

There are just too many references and jokes, and the author keeps switching between third-person and first-person perspectives while using them. There's a lot of madness mixed with a little plot, making it dizzying to read. It's purely self-indulgent. The reading experience is terrible. The references have gotten to the point where the character dialogue is completely nonsensical. What is this? They've gone too far with their self-indulgence! #(Blue and sad)

Does this book feature leaky women? If not, I'll start reading.