Lunaxia, Mushoku Tensei's Companion

That's a bit much. Saying my writing is mediocre is one thing, questioning the accuracy of my data is another, but you can't just hurl insults at me. Any comments containing insults will be deleted.

In my opinion, the most brilliant part of this work is the protagonist's daily life with his family before the Great Transfer. In other jobless fanfics I've read, the authors often focus on the protagonist's romantic relationships, but this author writes about the protagonist's interactions with those around him, showing that the protagonist's integration into the other world isn't limited to a romantic partner. There might be some minor details that could be improved, but the interactions between the protagonist and Paul's family are the best I've ever seen.

Essentially a self-indulgent story; even the author himself admitted he's impressed with himself for keeping this up. This latest chapter is just too sweet! I suggest reading the chapters before and after "Dragon God Playing House" to see if you can handle it.

This is a bit of a rambling account; it just slowly flowed through my cerebral cortex and disappeared without a trace.

The most crucial aspect of the joblessness incident was the torture of Rudy, wasn't it? 1. Does Rudy think it's okay to use visual novel dialogue when talking to women? Then you might run into an unreasonable young lady who will beat you up no matter how kind you say something. 2. Did Rudy ignore his friend's help? Then let Rudy and his son, who haven't seen each other for many years due to the disaster, almost sever their relationship as soon as they meet because of an argument. 3. Rudy treats women as tools to satisfy his desires and takes advantage of them everywhere. He was impotent for three years, which made Rudy fall in love with men (?). 4. Did Rudy scoff at his brother's teachings before he time-traveled? Now Rudy is the older brother, and he has to deal with his truant and withdrawn younger sister. 5. Rudy has desires for his niece. Now Rudy's sister has taken action against his son, directly confronting the aunt-nephew relationship between his sister and son.

What does it mean? The two lines of text suddenly went blank, like a hastily done haircut. Has anyone finished watching this? Can you tell me what this crucial foreshadowing is, or is the disease cured immediately afterward? I'm afraid it's simply a projection of the author's yin and yang fantasies.

This book has a major flaw: the protagonist shouldn't be a time traveler. She doesn't seem like a Chinese person, much less a time traveler, and her character development is very thin. At least, I couldn't see any sense of realism in her. I feel the author has a bit of a pretentious, artsy vibe because this isn't the plot development of an online novel. There are too few exciting moments, and it has a kind of melancholic literature feel to it, but it's just about torturing the protagonist. I didn't see what the author wanted to express through the protagonist's experiences, so it's not serious literature either. To sum it up, whether in the realm of online novels or serious literature, this book is a half-baked, off-the-beaten-path mess.

The theory of lifespan is so appealing 😋, but please, please don't let it turn into some kind of deus ex machina happy ending!

I was engrossed in the slice-of-life scenes in the first volume, then the sudden loss of a hand and blindness completely ruined it. #(Crying)#(crying)#(crying)

I was initially put off by Luna's sudden loss of a hand and blindness, but curiosity led me to fast-forward to Luna's reunion with Paul and Noren. Paul, drunk after arguing with Rudy, was sobered up by Luna and saw his daughter's anguish at losing a hand and blindness, recalling someone's words, "Do you want to see your son missing a part of his body, with empty eyes?" And Noren, seeing his beloved sister like this, thinking, "Why did it have to be my sister, and not that annoying Rudy?" This plot design was truly delightful. I've made peace with the author's peculiar XP and am delighted to have read such a story 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀