I'm Really Not a Gal Conquest Expert

Shennong I was already overwhelmed by the plot after reading chapter 160-something. Ever since the author wrote about the protagonist being buried in the tunnel, the plot holes have been endless. Many readers in the comments section share my opinion. However, one reader thought it was due to Fifth Yiyi's influence. That reader completely misunderstands Fifth Yiyi's abilities. Fifth Yiyi only affects herself and related matters. People will simply forget about the video Fifth Yiyi posted, such as who posted it, or they will pretend the video doesn't exist. It doesn't affect people knowing that the tunnel collapsed because, firstly, the tunnel buried the protagonist, not Fifth Yiyi. Even if it were Fifth Yiyi, people would just continue clearing the tunnel. When counting the victims, no one would notice there was an extra victim. The author is clearly suffering from a plot hole, forcibly making people unaware of the tunnel collapse. If Fifth Yiyi's ability can influence people to forget the tunnel collapse, it means it affects not only herself but also unrelated others. In that case, Fifth Yiyi could simply write the Earth's name and the names of various technologies on paper, forcibly making people forget Earth and countless modern technologies, sending them back to the Stone Age. Even Odin of the Dragon Clan wasn't that powerful. At most, people would just forget who released the video, and those responsible for clearing the collapse would continue clearing it. The author is forcibly feeding the plot with poison.

Amazing! This veteran author is still getting more and more toxic with each chapter. He's only gotten this way since the book was published, and now he's developed a literary freak syndrome.

The latest chapters are a bit off. They've been spending too much time explaining the protagonist's romantic relationships, even going so far as to create a phone call scene for a minor female supporting character to prove how pure-hearted the protagonist is. If you want a harem, go for it; if you want pure love, don't pretend to be innocent and create romantic entanglements. The author's approach is baffling.

Here are my thoughts after reading several of the author's novels. First, there's too much rambling. The author is a fan of anime and manga, and I can understand his fondness for these characters, but does writing a novel require expressing all his thoughts about them? We pay to read a novel, not for your constant rambling. Second, the author is indecisive. He expresses his views on many things in life through the characters he creates in his novels. It's not incomprehensible, but it's excessive, making the protagonists feel indecisive and fussy, which is uncomfortable to read. Third, the author likes grand narratives, always burdening his characters with too much, making them feel empty. I've read several of his novels, and they're basically all the same—all skin and no substance. Although they're verbose, they're extremely hollow. I'm saying this in the hope that the author can improve and that he can return to Qidian.

Although as a long-time fan I know Apple's nature, I really don't recommend the "stomach-friendly" male lead in the current environment #(you know what I mean)

The tunnel was blown up, and they chased each other for so long on the highway. Didn't the authorities notice anything? And what about the gunshots at the dock? Is this really China?

I really don't understand how an experienced author like you can make so many mistakes that only beginners make, and write so many disgusting and toxic points.

Kids, you've ruined a whole major part of your life. The author must be having another brainwave.

Author, what are you really thinking? What good does it do you to go against your readers? Are you filtering your readers? That's interesting, I'll just have to read on.

I'll read it after he finishes writing about the pre-Shark Arm civilization and the simulator.