Zenless Zone Zero: The Gray Beast and Bangboo Daddy

It basically just borrows the background of zzz, but the story it writes is its own, with a large number of original characters and plots. The writing style is alright for CWM, it's already considered top-tier, but the plot felt a bit too awkward to me personally. I struggled to connect with the author's attempts to evoke strong emotions; it felt like pure teenage angst. Maybe I'm just past that age. There's a lot of self-indulgent, pretentious writing. Furthermore, I felt there were too many inexplicably bad plot points, such as the main siblings who, when faced with a mental breakdown, would crawl in a dark, writhing manner. Another plot point I've been wanting to criticize is the scenes between Zhu Yuan and the protagonist. I can tell the author put a lot of effort into portraying a senior police academy officer, the Arkham Knight, and an idealistic junior officer. But the question is, is the protagonist an Arkham Knight? He's not just a simple, gray, two-legged, multi-purpose animal; isn't he the military's black glove? He also represents part of the order. When do special military operations conflict with police investigations? Furthermore, the protagonist's actions involve killing one to save a hundred; giving these cyborgs a political commissar would be far more effective. Furthermore, regarding Zhu Yuan, Elidu itself is a place with weak order. It has all sorts of entities: the army, the government, cave raiders, shoemakers, rebels, and outer-area gangs. Justice and order? Whose justice is that? In the original work, Zhu Yuan was willing to cooperate with the rope craftsman, even providing him with some assistance. To put it bluntly, her principles were less about law and more about a simple sense of justice. It's even more intense than Resident Evil; in a post-apocalyptic world where only one city remains, who still blindly believes in the law? In this book, Zhu Yuan is simply tormented by a mentally ill person. You could just say you're from a special forces unit, helping your senior solve cases and even having a meal with him in the cafeteria. Even if you didn't want to drag her into the dark side, there's no need to tease her every other day. And most importantly, not only are you a military black glove, but you also make Zhu Yuan misunderstand you as Batman. It's so sentimental, so incredibly sentimental, but these days only a few CWM books are worth reading, sigh.

Although not many people read this book, I still created a book group. I mainly want to know everyone's opinions on this book or if they have any suggestions for improvement. Currently, a friend has already given an opinion in the comments section, but it is not very convenient to discuss in the comments section, so I created a group. Group number: 1051540370

Hey, if you can't run AI, don't bother. Your female lead's Shanghai-style battle scene is just too much for me to handle. I used to be happy to see your updates, but every time I see that picture, I don't want to look anymore.

Does the main character have a romantic storyline?

Because only those who have never been in a relationship are good at writing about romance, therefore, the author... #(Funny)#(funny)#(funny)

To be honest, turning your original content into side stories would be much better. People will see that this book is primarily for those looking for fanfiction in the exclusive section, and they don't want to waste money subscribing to irrelevant chapters.

Having just read Chapter 87 of Volume 3, I suddenly realized something: the author doesn't seem to have described the use of the most important concept in the world-building—the use of "state" (not counting that abstract energy block). The reason this group of cyborgs consumes so much energy seems purely due to their powerful brick-throwing abilities; while others utilize environmental states, these characters rely entirely on internal energy. Since the main way of utilizing the state relies on things like resonance (the technology-related ones mainly rely on resonance), songs in this world really do have a role in assisting combat. Moreover, in this world view, the sound engine is actually a real existence, and everyone with a little skill has one. Even pure cultivators like Yun Kui Shan would carry one because it is a pure buff with almost no consumption.

Stop living the pampered life and get up to write and update!

When are you going to bring Anna over to CCB? The problem is that one person is under too much pressure and has too much internal conflict. If Anna drains them dry, they won't have the energy for internal conflict anymore. #(Angry)

Just wondering, is it a single female lead or multiple female leads?